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Question A 2 asked about Recovery. Do you answer A2 in your report?
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PAGE 1
Text Comment. What was the aim of the report?
Text Comment. I think there is too much specific infomration here. Can you pick out and summarise the key findings?
Comment 1
1. put general sentences before specifics
2. was the prevalence in Japan lower than NZ?
Comment 2
good
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Text Comment. Question A 2 asked about Recovery. Do you answer A2 in your report?
Comment 3
unclear .
what does
evaluated country-specific
mean?
Comment 4
percentage
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Comment 5
do you have evidence for this?
i.e. See Table 2.
Comment 6
why did you do this statistical test? what does it mean?
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Comment 7
Is this the section where you answer A2 - countries most likely to recover?
Maybe you need to make that clearer in the heading.
Comment 8
is this correct?
Do you mean number of daily cases or infection rate ?
Comment 9
which table/figures are these in?
Comment 10
which table./graph can I see this information in ?
Comment 11
you need to refer to the Table earlier
Comment 12
I am a bit confused by the order of information in this paragraph.
Early you talk about the correlation between deaths and hospitalization .. which I understand.
But then you start talking just about deaths here - I don't understand why? What are you trying to show?
Comment 13
WHat does this show?
e.g. This shows that seriousness of COvID itself. It can cause death regardless of whether you have an underlying condition or not.
Also, why is this important to talk about?
Text Comment. Where is A2 - the countries more likely to recover?
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Strikethrough.
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Comment 15
Can you say state the values or range of values referring to the Table to prove this claim?
Comment 16
Do you mean
Correlation between stringency indices and number of cases per million; and vaccination rates and number of cases per million ?
Text Comment. do you need to summarize your key findings before making recommendations?
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