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RGM2 — RGM2 TASK 2: PROFESSIONAL REPORT

COMPOSITION: WRITING WITH A STRATEGY — D269

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EVALUATION REPORT — ATTEMPT 1 — REVISION NEEDED

Overall Evaluator Comments

EVALUATOR COMMENTS

You are encouraged to connect with your Course Instructor to strengthen your understanding of the content before working further on this assessment. You demonstrated a logical organization of information on blockchain technology by using clear section headings. Please see the comments below for insight into evaluation scoring and required revisions.

A. Purpose

NOT EVIDENT

Not EvidentThe submission does not explain the purpose of writing the report.

EVALUATOR COMMENTS: ATTEMPT 1

NA

B. Intended Audience

NOT EVIDENT

Not EvidentThe submission does not describe the report’s intended audience.

EVALUATOR COMMENTS: ATTEMPT 1

NA

C. Report

APPROACHING COMPETENCE

Approaching CompetenceThe submission includes a report, but it is not written for a professional audience or it does not use 1 of the given expository structures.

EVALUATOR COMMENTS: ATTEMPT 1

The submission provides information on using blockchain technology to improve business operations. The submission does not provide a report that uses one of the given expository structures (cause or effect essay, solution proposal essay, or compare and contrast essay).

C1a. Introduction

NOT EVIDENT

Not EvidentThe submission does not include an introduction.

EVALUATOR COMMENTS: ATTEMPT 1

NA

C1b. Thesis

NOT EVIDENT

Not EvidentThe submission does not include a thesis statement.

EVALUATOR COMMENTS: ATTEMPT 1

NA

C1c. Transitions

NOT EVIDENT

Not EvidentThe submission does not include transitions.

EVALUATOR COMMENTS: ATTEMPT 1

NA

C1d. Main Points

NOT EVIDENT

Not EvidentThe submission's main points do not align with the thesis statement.

EVALUATOR COMMENTS: ATTEMPT 1

NA

C1e. Appropriate Development

NOT EVIDENT

Not EvidentThe submission does not develop the body of the report.

EVALUATOR COMMENTS: ATTEMPT 1

NA

C1f. Conclusion

NOT EVIDENT

Not EvidentThe submission does not include a conclusion.

EVALUATOR COMMENTS: ATTEMPT 1

NA

D. Sources

NOT EVIDENT

Not EvidentThe submission does not include both in-text citations and a reference list for sources that are quoted, paraphrased, or summarized.

EVALUATOR COMMENTS: ATTEMPT 1

NA

E. Professional Communication

NOT EVIDENT

Not EvidentContent is unstructured, is disjointed, or contains pervasive errors in mechanics, usage, or grammar. Vocabulary or tone is unprofessional or distracts from the topic.

EVALUATOR COMMENTS: ATTEMPT 1

NA