Essay

Article Error You may need to use an article before this word. Consider using the article the.

Proofread This part of the sentence contains an error or misspelling that makes your meaning unclear.

Comment 8

achieving

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Comment 9

too informal - not academic style

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P/V You have used the passive voice in this sentence. You may want to revise it using the active voice.

Article Error You may need to remove this article.

Article Error You may need to use an article before this word. Consider using the article the.

Article Error You may need to use an article before this word. Consider using the article the.

Article Error You may need to use an article before this word.

Article Error You may need to use an article before this word.

Comment 10

I thought you said the voting worked?

Possessive Review the rules for possessive nouns.

Comment 11

Delete heading and join with the conclusion paragraph

Article Error You may need to use an article before this word. Consider using the article the.

Article Error You may need to use an article before this word.

Article Error You may need to use an article before this word.

Text Comment. I would suggest the following structure (don't use headings though): Introduction First important events/issues and analysis of these Second important events/issues and analysis of these Conclusion - i.e. your learnings and action plan

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Comment 12

References 

and put in centre of the page

Text Comment. titles of books and journals need to be in italics

12% SIMILARITY INDEX

8% INTERNET SOURCES

2% PUBLICATIONS

10% STUDENT PAPERS

1 4% 2 2% 3 2% 4 2% 5 1% 6 1%

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701 Reflective Essay ORIGINALITY REPORT

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FINAL GRADE

5/0 701 Reflective Essay GRADEMARK REPORT

GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

PAGE 1

Text Comment. Include a title page

Text Comment. Include a short introduction - what is this essay about? what model are you using?

Comment 1

No headings - you have to write in prose

Comment 2

include a citation to Tuckman

Article Error You may need to use an article before this word.

Comment 3

accommodated

Also, is this the correct verb? Do you mean expressed clearly? 

Verb This verb may be incorrect. Proofread the sentence to make sure you have used the correct form of the verb.

Article Error You may need to remove this article.

Comment 4

Who's idea was this? 

Why did you not give your opinion on this? 

Article Error You may need to use an article before this word. Consider using the article the.

Run-on This sentence may be a run-on sentence.

Article Error You may need to use an article before this word.

P/V You have used the passive voice in this sentence. You may want to revise it using the active voice.

Text Comment. I would suggest deleting the previous paragraph, and writing ONE paragraph describing key events linked ot this analysis paragraph.

Article Error You may need to use an article before this word. Consider using the article a.

Article Error You may need to use an article before this word.

Comment 5

did you talk about this when describing your experience?

Article Error You may need to use an article before this word.

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Comment 6

I would suggest writing a paragraph describing key events related to this analysis below. 

Sp. This word is misspelled. Use a dictionary or spellchecker when you proofread your work.

Comment 7

Include (YEAR)