project management scope baseline?

This is a start to the scope baseline but you seem to have forgotten who your audience is. The scope statement should be tailored to the people who will use and be affected by this project. I would think that the people living in that community would benefit the most from know what is going to be delivered and what they should expect of this project. Your scope statement is a listing of the project management and project team activities. That isn't correct. The audience for the WBS and dictionary is the project team. It should explain to them what the results of their work should look like or how it should behave. The dictionary descriptions are specific to THIS project and should be enough for the team member to know how to meet expectations. Your dictionary is missing all that. So look through my specific comments in the attached file. They should guide you in the right direction to help you finalize this assignment. Let me know if you have any questions.