As a tutor I am not supposed to review assessments prior to submission and grading by instructor. I did however glance at the attachment. Please look at the example formatting and the content. Let the grading rubric guide your content. Use the same level one headings and make sure your annotated bibliography is in the same format and location as the example paper. Remember the focus of the assessment is how you are conducting research and what you found. You have put a great deal of work in the assessment; you need to be sure you are providing the information being requested rather than the ideas you are excited to present.