Rewrite an article

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Description:

The current write up has no hypothesis and no storyline. It needs to be rewritten to make it more readable with a definitive beginning, body and conclusion. There is too much business context which isn't required. The focus needs to be on 2-3 key challenged in the Rewards/Compensation & Benefits space in the Cement sector (for eg. the middle management becoming bulkier and hence wage cost expected to go up and top people retiring etc.

DESCRITPION

This is a rewrite (not from scratch) and I need it to read like a story with a defined beginning middle and end, preferably with a hypothesis and a conclusion. Adding the current article. I think it's decently written but still requires some work. This is for a magazine so needs to read like a strong opinion. References not necessary. And I would prefer if the length was maintained as much as possible.

2 SAMPLES ATTACHED

Attaching 2 articles from the same magazine so you get a sense of the kind of tone and language needed.