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Dr. Erin Burns-Davies

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19 March 2023

Tic's Transformation in Lovecraft Country: The Influence of War Trauma Comment by Erin Burns-Davies: Italicize

Lovecraft Country is a show that explores the intersection of racism, supernaturalism, and history. In episode six, titled "Meet Me in Daegu," we are introduced to Tic's experiences in the Korean War, which have a profound impact on his character. Tic’s experience in the Korean War shapes his personality, relationships, and actions, leading him to become a resilient, empathetic, and brave agent of change who challenges the racist and patriarchal norms of his society. Comment by Erin Burns-Davies: Italicize Comment by Erin Burns-Davies: Word repetition

Tic's experiences in the Korean War influenced him in a variety of ways. First, the conflict has scarred him and plagued him with images of bloodshed and death. His nightmares, flashbacks, and responses to violence all show the effects of this trauma. According to the National Institute of Mental Health (2021), the trauma of war can have lasting effects on individuals, including symptoms of post-traumatic stress disorder (PTSD). In Lovecraft Country, we see how Tic's experiences in the Korean War have affected him in profound ways, including the development of PTSD symptoms such as nightmares, flashbacks, and hypervigilance (“Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder”). As for the American dream and patriotism, the war has turned him cynical and disillusioned. He can see through the prejudice and dishonesty of the American government and military, which betrayed the faith of its warriors of color. He now passionately values life and love as a result of the conflict. In a world full of chaos and suffering, he treasures his ties with Leti and Ji-Ah because they provide him comfort and purpose. Comment by Erin Burns-Davies: Word repetition Comment by Erin Burns-Davies: Be more specific. Comment by Erin Burns-Davies: We don't actually see him experience flashbacks, but you could speculate that it's possible. Comment by Erin Burns-Davies: Delete Comment by Erin Burns-Davies: ("Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder"). Comment by Erin Burns-Davies: Italicize Comment by Erin Burns-Davies: Already stated Comment by Erin Burns-Davies: Analyze specific examples of this in the show. Also, consider that Tic's relationships with Leti and Ji-Ah happen in different periods and likely had different effects on him.

Additionally, Tic's experiences in the Korean War influenced him in a variety of ways. First, the conflict has scarred him and plagued him with images of bloodshed and death. His nightmares, flashbacks, and responses to violence all show the effects of this trauma. As for the American dream and patriotism, the war has turned him cynical and disillusioned. He can see through the prejudice and dishonesty of the American government and military, which betrayed the faith of its warriors of color. He now passionately values life and love as a result of the conflict. In a world full of chaos and suffering, he treasures his ties with Leti and Ji-Ah because they provide him comfort and purpose. Comment by Erin Burns-Davies: Be more specific. Comment by Erin Burns-Davies: You're making the same points as the previous paragraph.

However, Tic's experiences in the Korean War have a significant impact on his behavior and choices, as exemplified in episode 6 of Lovecraft Country. His time in Korea motivates him to look for information about his ancestry and history, leading him to discover his link to the magical realm of Ardham. For instance, his growing affection for Ji-Ah, a Kumiho he meets in Korea, inspires him to uncover the truth about her existence and the supernatural world she inhabits. Tic's wartime experiences also give him a sense of purpose and urgency to fight against evil forces that threaten his loved ones and the world. Furthermore, his experiences motivate him to question and oppose the racist and patriarchal social standards that he perceives as a continuation of the systemic oppression he experienced during the war. This is demonstrated in his treatment of Ji-Ah, who is ostracized and mistreated by the American soldiers due to her Korean heritage. Tic's refusal to let their racial differences come between them and his determination to see beyond these societal norms showcases his transformation as a resilient, empathetic, and brave agent of change. Comment by Erin Burns-Davies: Most of the points here aren't quite accurate. It's Montrose who is searching for information about his late wife's heritage. After Ji-Ah's true form is revealed to Tic, he leaves her and doesn't bring up what he experienced to anyone else. And Ji-Ah is affected by the war but isn't directly ostracized or mistreated by the American soldiers.

Overall, Tic's experiences during the Korean War have deeply influenced his personality, relationships, and behavior, and have given him a unique perspective on global injustices. Through his story, we can see how trauma, love, and resistance can be transformative forces in our lives and society. It also serves as a reminder of the sacrifices and struggles of those who have fought and continue to fight for our freedom and dignity. Lovecraft Country is a groundbreaking television series that explores the intersection of race, supernaturalism, and history. Through the character of Tic, the show portrays the profound impact of war trauma on the individual, the disillusionment of the American dream and patriotism, and the transformative power of love and resistance. As Courtney Bryant (2021) notes in her article on the queering of the flesh and redemption in Lovecraft Country, the show also challenges the traditional notions of gender and sexuality and offers a vision of incarnational power that can reshape our understanding of the human experience. Lovecraft Country is not just a show about monsters and magic; it is a powerful commentary on the systemic oppression and the resilience of the human spirit. It is a reminder of the sacrifices and struggles of those who have fought and continue to fight for justice and equality. Comment by Erin Burns-Davies: Presumably, but you don't really discuss this in any specific way in the essay. Comment by Erin Burns-Davies: Italicize Comment by Erin Burns-Davies: Already stated in the intro Comment by Erin Burns-Davies: Move this reference to a specific point in the essay's body. Comment by Erin Burns-Davies: Italicize Comment by Erin Burns-Davies: The essay could have potential, but some of the points are too broad. The second body paragraph is a repetition of the first. Also, there are some inaccuracies about the plot. Carefully proofread. Study MLA. 68%

Works Cited

Bryant, Courtney. “Incarnational Power: The Queering of the Flesh and Redemption in Lovecraft Country.” Black Theology: An International Journal, vol. 19, no. 3, Nov. 2021, pp. 207–17. EBSCOhost, https://doi.org/10.1080/14769948.2021.1990497. Comment by Erin Burns-Davies: Don't italicize Comment by Erin Burns-Davies: Don't italicize

"Meet Me in Daegu." Lovecraft Country, season 1, episode 6, HBO, 20 Sept. 2020. HBO Max, https://play.hbomax.com/episode/urn:hbo:episode:GXx9qdAXxYq0MlAEAAABW. Comment by Erin Burns-Davies: Italicize Comment by Erin Burns-Davies: Italicize Comment by Erin Burns-Davies: Don't italicize

"Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder." National Institute of Mental Health, May 2022, https://www.nimh.nih.gov/health/topics/post-traumatic-stress-disorder-ptsd. Comment by Erin Burns-Davies: Italicize Comment by Erin Burns-Davies: Don't italicize