Cause and Effect Essay

Professor  Melissa Villamil

ESOL 0354

11 February 2021

                                                                               The positive and negative effects of staying at home .  Comment by melissa.villamil: In this style of academic writing, a title is not in bold letters. Titles need to have the first letter of the first word and the first letter of each important word capitalized. The important words in a title are nouns, verbs, adjectives, and adverbs. Titles do not have final punctuation without a very, very special reason. Here is a link to the library website with an example paper: https://library.hccs.edu/mla-guide/formatting

                  Quarantine is the restriction or the movement of people ,goods ,animals,due to the outbreak of pandemic inorder to prevent the spread of disease. It is distinct from medical isolation and it is also an aspect of boarder control. This was applied throughout the world during covid 19 pandemic since 2020.Staying at home during the pandemic has brought both positive and negative effects on humanity. Comment by melissa.villamil: prep

            One of the positive and negative effect of living at home during the pandemic is that ,it has brought emotional and financial strain to many people.Many people  have loss their jobs due to the pandemic.But staying at home has negatively affected so many people who are having depression,unemployment,and anxiety it has affected their emotional instability.For example,many people who had stop taking drugs have gone back into taking drugs  .This is because they have loss their jobs due to the pandemic and this affected them mentally and financially.But staying at home has affected some people positivel in the sense that ,many people have came up with creative ideas that has enable to make money inorder to meet up with their financial needs.For example,many people have been able to make home made hand sanitizers ,face masks to sell them .This has a great positive impact on the world as it helps to reduce the spread of germs . Comment by melissa.villamil: delete the comma Comment by melissa.villamil: vf Comment by melissa.villamil: delete this word Comment by melissa.villamil: ro Comment by melissa.villamil: vf Comment by melissa.villamil: Avoid starting sentences with coordinating conjunctions. It is informal. Use a different phrase or word here. Comment by melissa.villamil: Delete the comma Comment by melissa.villamil: Delete these words Comment by melissa.villamil: Use a coordinating conjunction here and delete the comma since there are only two items in your list.

     In addition, the struggle of distance learning has affected everyone staying at home during this pandemic. This point has affected the importance of learning because many people who are not computer literates, studing at home has post a lot of dificulties learning at home .It has made learning so challenging because many do not have access to technolgy.Inspite of the point that may people who do not have access to technolgy and do not have computer knowledge,staying at home during this pandemic has also affected many students positively.For example, govement have supply many computers to many schools and those learning at home also have access to these privileges .So staying at home during the pandemic has affected some people positively. It has helped those who are not computer literates to master and know how to use computers since  it is very helpful during this pandemic. Comment by melissa.villamil: sp Comment by melissa.villamil: cs Comment by melissa.villamil: art Comment by melissa.villamil: s/v agr Comment by melissa.villamil: vf

      Futhermore,living at home during the pandemic has affected so many people positively and negatively.It has affected many people negatively in that ,many people have gain weight and health issues.For example,alot of people have gain weight by poor eating habits because they are always at home.Some people can not  exercise which has affected their health condition and conseqently ,many have loss their lives.It has affected some people positively because due to excessive weight,many are now interested in doing alot ofexercises like yoga at home to make them stay healthy .Staying at home has made some people to become more conscious of living a healthy life than beore.therefore,staying at home during the pandemic has affected the health and living conditions of some people  both positively and negatively. Comment by melissa.villamil: vf Comment by melissa.villamil: punc

      Finally ,in conclusion,due to staying at home during the pandemic,it has brought both positive and negative effects on the global world and people. Comment by melissa.villamil: You can add more to the conclusion paragraph.