Public Speaking Touchstone 2

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Name: Tomia Willingham Date: March 15, 2021

Public Speaking Touchstone 2 Template

Complete the following template, including all parts. Fill out all cells using complete sentences, aiming for one to three complete sentences for each cell of the template.

PART 1: TOPIC

Purpose

What are you hoping to achieve with this speech?

The speech is intended to develop great leaders that can inspire action amongst the employees.

Audience

Who will be in your audience? What do you know about them?

The audience includes organizational leaders such as managers, supervisors as well as entities intending to be great leaders .

Thesis

What is the key message of your speech?

A leader’s behavior need to motivate the employee to act in the same way through development of inspirational culture in the organization .

PART 2: SOURCES

SOURCE 1

Source Title

Leadership Styles in Influencing Employees’ Job Performances.

Author(s) Name

Wen, T. B., Ho, T. C., Kelana, B. W. Y., Othman, R., & Syed, O. R.

Retrieved from

Where did you get this source? Include location, book, periodical, url, etc.

https://www.researchgate.net/profile/Obed-Syed/publication/335910122_Leadership_Styles_in_Influencing_Employees'_Job_Performances/links/5d83264aa6fdcc8fd6f3c4fa/Leadership-Styles-in-Influencing-Employees-Job-Performances.pdf

Age

How recent is the data or information presented in your source? When was the source published? If the source is a website, when was the website last updated?

The source was published in 2019

Depth

What does the source cover?

How well-researched and detailed is the source? How much depth is the topic covered in? How is this content and level of detail relevant to your purpose, audience, and message?

This resource covers various leadership strategies that the leaders can use to inspire the employees in the organization. The resource illustrates the roles to be played by the leader based on resources and secondary sources. The content matches the desires agenda of leaders inspiring the employees through building inspirational culture.

Author

How is the author qualified to speak on the topic? What is the author's purpose? What biases might they have? Is the information the author's opinion alone or is it supported by cited facts?

The article is authors by five authors who are all scholars.

The authors provide guidelines to organizational leaders on how to improve the workplace culture through influencing the employees. The information is not biased in any way since it is supported by other cite facts and researchers conducted by other researchers .

Money

Who funds the website or publication? Are there items endorsed or for sale? If so, what items? What is the reputation of the website or publication?

It is funded by Azman Hashim International Business School, University Technology Malaysia. The items are not for sale they are available in goggle scholar website which is one of the website with good reputation on learning materials.

SOURCE 2

Source Title

Employee’s critical thinking, Leaders inspirational motivation and voice behavior.

Author(s) Name

The authors are Jing Jiang, Ang Gao, and Baiyin Yang

Retrieved from

Where did you get this source? Include location, book, periodical, url, etc.

The source is found in Google scholar. Here is a link to it. https://econtent.hogrefe.com/doi/full/10.1027/1866-5888/a000193

Age

How recent is the data or information presented in your source? When was the source published? If the source is a website, when was the website last updated?

The source was published in 2018.

Depth

What does the source cover?

How well-researched and detailed is the source? How much depth is the topic covered in? How is this content and level of detail relevant to your purpose, audience, and message?

It covers on how leader’s inspirational leadership can give the followers a solid source of group distinctiveness and stimulate them to put more effort. The source covers both the leaders and the employees’ behaviors through research and uses external secondary resources to back up their data.

The source backs up the thesis by illustrating how understanding of issues in the workplace and employees help them to express their ideas which are influenced by inspirational leaders.

Author

How is the author qualified to speak on the topic? What is the author's purpose? What biases might they have? Is the information the author's opinion alone or is it supported by cited facts?

Some of these authors have worked on related projects which gives them more experience in the field. The authors are also scholars based on their research and have conducted research to back up their thesis in the sources. They have backed their arguments with evidence from the resources.

Money

Who funds the website or publication? Are there items endorsed or for sale? If so, what items? What is the reputation of the website or publication?

The authors have wholly funded the article. They only offer a preview on the website while the rest part of the article is for sale. However, the website has a good reputation with its provision of educational materials.

SOURCE 3

Source Title

How leadership and trust in leaders foster employees' behavior toward knowledge sharing.

Author(s) Name

Phong, L. B., Hui, L., & Son, T. T.

Retrieved from

Where did you get this source? Include location, book, periodical, url, etc.

The sources have been retrieved from goggle scholar

https://www.ingentaconnect.com/content/sbp/sbp/2018/00000046/00000005/art00001

Age

How recent is the data or information presented in your source? When was the source published? If the source is a website, when was the website last updated?

The resource was published in 2018

Depth

What does the source cover?

How well-researched and detailed is the source? How much depth is the topic covered in? How is this content and level of detail relevant to your purpose, audience, and message?

The article focuses on how trust among the leaders can be used to foster inspirational behaviors among the employees. The article is based up by qualitative research conducted in multiple organizations. It is also backed up by secondary resources presenting comprehensive literature on the topic .

Author

How is the author qualified to speak on the topic? What is the author's purpose? What biases might they have? Is the information the author's opinion alone or is it supported by cited facts?

All the authors have conducted similar researchers on the topic and they have also backed up their argument is using secondary resources. They are also scholars and they have used information such as research conducted by other scholars to back up their arguments.

Money

Who funds the website or publication? Are there items endorsed or for sale? If so, what items? What is the reputation of the website or publication?

The authors have fully funded the sources which include the research that was conducted to support the thesis. Some of the content is endorsed which the full text is for sale. They are sold at 39 dollars in Amazon.

PART 3: SUPPORT

SUPPORT #1

Support

What is the piece of support (example, statistic, analogy, definition, visual, story, testimony) that you are going to use in your speech? E.g. “50% of all American voters…”

Research on organizational leadership indicate there are various ways to influence the employees .

Type of Support

What type of support is it? Is it an example, a statistic, an analogy, a definition, a visual, a story, or a testimony?

Literature

Relevance

How does this piece of support reinforce your message?

It will provide and alternative view of different leadership styles used by managers to improve the employees.

SUPPORT #2

Support

What is the piece of support (example, statistic, analogy, definition, visual, story, testimony) that you are going to use in your speech? E.g. “50% of all American voters…”

Leadership is never about title or designation. It involves inspiration and influence.

Type of Support

What type of support is it? Is it an example, a statistic, an analogy, a definition, a visual, a story, or a testimony?

A quote

Relevance

How does this piece of support reinforce your message?

It defines some of the qualities of an inspirational leader.

SUPPORT #3

Support

What is the piece of support (example, statistic, analogy, definition, visual, story, testimony) that you are going to use in your speech? E.g. “50% of all American voters…”

A great leader inspires others to do more, dream more, learn more and become more.

Type of Support

What type of support is it? Is it an example, a statistic, an analogy, a definition, a visual, a story, or a testimony?

testimony

Relevance

How does this piece of support reinforce your message?

It will help identify some of the impacts of the leaders on employees.

SUPPORT #4

Support

What is the piece of support (example, statistic, analogy, definition, visual, story, testimony) that you are going to use in your speech? E.g. “50% of all American voters…”

More than half of the successful organizations are led by inspirational leaders.

Type of Support

What type of support is it? Is it an example, a statistic, an analogy, a definition, a visual, a story, or a testimony?

Research

Relevance

How does this piece of support reinforce your message?

It will help emphasize the importance of inspirational leadership in an organization.

SUPPORT #5

Support

What is the piece of support (example, statistic, analogy, definition, visual, story, testimony) that you are going to use in your speech? E.g. “50% of all American voters…”

No man can make a great leader who wants to do it all by himself or earn all credit

Type of Support

What type of support is it? Is it an example, a statistic, an analogy, a definition, a visual, a story, or a testimony?

quote

Relevance

How does this piece of support reinforce your message?

Will help emphasize how great leaders use inspiration to develop other leaders.

PART 4: REFLECTION

What have you learned from completing this activity?

Leadership is not only being at the top but leading other entities to develop their career and be leaders too while achieving the organizational goals. The activity helps to collect all the needed materials that help develop an outstanding and comprehensive speech .

Touchstone 2 Rubric and Feedback

Rubric Category

Feedback

Score

Response Quality

Answers all questions in the Touchstone 2 Template, primarily demonstrating thoughtful consideration, but some responses are lacking in detail or insight.

Minor aspects of relevance and credibility are misunderstood.

12/15

Acceptable

Purpose, Audience, and Thesis

Includes a purpose, audience, and thesis that are somewhat vague, lacking in detail, or are not well aligned.

12/15

Acceptable

Sources

The 3 listed sources are all lacking in relevance and/or credibility.

9/20

Needs Substantial Revision

Support

Three or four of the pieces of support do not directly support the thesis. Includes one type of support.

13/25

Needs Improvement

Tomia,

You found some sources that may be credible, but you do not relate them to supporting materials you list or show how they will relate to your American business audience. You will also need a greater variety of support types to provide a balance of appeals to pathos, logos, and ethos to motivate your audience with this speech. My best advice for you is to make another attempt, using credible sources and supports more relevant to your business.

Kindly,

Professor Davis

Overall Score:

46/75

�Hi again, Tomia.

�What kind of company is this intended for?

�Your thesis should be the most important single sentence in the speech. Design it to align with what you know about the audience and what you want to accomplish in this setting. Your statement seems rather abstract to me, not specific to the occasion.

�It does not seem to be written for an American business audience.

�This link is to an Abstract, not a full-text article.

�“We explored the effect of transformational leadership and trust in leaders on knowledge collecting and knowledge donating, the 2 components of knowledge sharing, with data from 368 employees at 63 Chinese firms.” Again, not intended for an American business audience.  

�All your sources appear to contain highly technical research studies that are not credibly written for American companies or of relevant depth for your audience and thesis statement.

�From which of the above sources does this support come? Always cite your sources to the audience. It will enhance your credibility and that of your message.

�Is it an example, a statistic, an analogy, a definition, a visual, a story, or a testimony?

�From where? All the supports should come from one of three credible, relevant sources you listed above. That is how we know the supports are credible and relevant, too.

�Whose testimony? Is it credible?

�We look for 5 citations of directly relevant pieces of supporting evidence to back up the claims you make in your speech. All supports need citations either verbally in the speech or visually.

Supports should relevant and vary in the support types listed in the template sufficiently to provide a balance of appeals to pathos, logos, and ethos.

�What did you learn about finding credible sources with supporting materials relevant to your audience purpose and thesis?