Fix my rough draft to final draft

Provided notes

Thesis notes

Tyrone,

  You have a start to a good research paper, but your proposal is incomplete. You need to have a thesis statement that presents what you plan to argue. You seem to have researched Southern Gothic, so you may want to argue which version--the text or the film--best depicts Southern Gothic and why.

  Please see the rubric for other comments.

Prof L

Notes on rough draft

Your essay looks good. You have a bit too much description/explanation of the Southern Gothic in your intro, and your thesis needs to address which version, the film or the short story, best depicts the Southern Gothic.