Good work! Your topic is super broad -- you'll need to work on narrowing the scope of your paper otherwise it'll be a general, surface level as opposed to a nuanced and specific one analysis. See comments in proposal for further feedback. I recommend coming to office hours to discuss the feedback and how to move forward with your paper. You have a great ideas, we just need to work on narrowing and developing an analysis. See section syllabus for info re office hours.