Project: Coaching 3

Project: Coaching 2

Coaching Session 1

This is the graded feedback that I received below. Please keep this feedback in mind with future tutoring session for Project Coaching 3, Coaching Session 2.

Provided a detailed written recap of your coaching session.  The recap should specify a concise introduction, the process (i.e., practical coaching session), and ending—anticipated results.] Concise, but needs to be more comprehensive and evidence-based!

Analyzed two key objectives and analyzed why these objectives are significant to your coachee. Your objectives should be drawn from “best practices” of coaching. Style and Technique used by the coach are explained but not analyzed. This area of your paper can be improved with a very comprehensive description of client’s behavior and concise portrayal of coach’s use of cognitive coaching with the client.] A few more citations would justify your premises and provide for a more comprehensive analysis.

Evaluated the personal and professional improvements your coachee hopes to make in life after these objectives are achieved . This section should be a very comprehensive discussion of the “growth and development” that the coachee intends to achieve after the coaching experience. The coachee's voice should be present here. ] Very Good start, however, this area requires further exploration.

Presented a structured document free of spelling and grammatical errors.[Few comma/sentence structural errors; Many of your sentences are written in "passive voice."] End all papers with a comprehensive conclusion. Thank you for including citations from your course text in addition to at least two outside leadership resources.

Properly cited sources using APA format.[Few of the same APA errors that were included in previous paper occur in this current paper: 1. Title page is not structured according to APA 7th edition standards. 2. The same title you provided on your title page must be presented on the first line of page two. 3. Levels of heading--Capitalize the first letters of words that contain four or more characters: except prepositions. 4. All References must be formatted according to APA 7th edition standards.]