Classmate Profile

Classmate Profile: 2-4 pages, typed double spaced, posted as .doc in Assignments folder by Thursday, Jan. 30.

              1. Does the profile avoid first-person references?  

              2. Does the story gush about the subject? Does it contain adjectives? 

              3. Does the story have interesting anecdotes? 

              4. Does the story raise questions that it doesn't answer? 

              5. Does the lead draw you in? 

              6. Is the ending strong?

              7. Does the story follow AP style? 

              8. Can you find any grammatical errors? 

              9. Does the story slip into list mode? How could it go deeper? 

              10. What could improve the profile?