Deliverable 6 - Leadership’s Role in Creating an Innovative Culture

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Thanks for your presentation on Tesla and Apple. I would encourage you to use some images in your presentation. Also, almost all of the information is good, but unoriginal and not cited. That was the problem primarily throughout. Once you go back and show all your sources (and include on reference page with link), I can go back and review again. Reach out with any questions.

Slide 1/The title slide doesn't include the company names or what the purpose of the presentation is. There is no citations for the information in the notes and it is needed.

Introduction/ needs to site

Slide 3/ 4/ No citations for the information on Tesla. This is an academic misconduct issue. You might cite where you learn the information.

You sight some information, but then other information is not cited. Also, you say that promote creativity and innovation but how? They don't mention teamwork, but then you speak to team work and cite it. No citations for Apple.

Slide 5/6/ Same thing here. A lot of information that needs cited/referenced.

Slide 7/8 /You sight some information, but then other information is not cited. Also, you say that promote creativity and innovation but how? They don't mention teamwork, but then you speak to team work and cite it. No citations for Apple.

Slide 9/ 10 /Where did the "intraneurship" idea come from? Needs cited. The other information can be a hypothesis and doesn't have to be cited unless unoriginal

Slide 11 / good conclusion

Great spelling and grammar

Great speaker notes