correct grammar and references
You need to put in footnotes on each of these assignments and demonstrate to me that you have completed the readings…
Many of your ideas and statements are opinion. You do not support your ideas with facts or evidence. Here are a few examples: Feminism is a kind of belief that men should have the same rights and opportunities as women. ??? Where does this idea come from?? Feminism is a belief that all people should have equal rights—not just men, who are the ones who held all the power for so long. Think that such as "male - strong", "feminine - gentle" character characteristics are acquired, women should be and men exactly the same treatment. Under this assertion, it seems difficult for women to pay relief in the job market, because these feminists seem to require men and women to wear a mask, so that companies can not see this it is male or female, but in this case, women are directly faced with the same dilemma of frail men; because the fertility or fra
There is nothing to support these ideas. Certainly, had you completed the required readings, you might not be making this statement. Not only do you need to re-submit all of your essays with footnotes and references, you need to get someone to help you edit them because your spelling and grammar make the essays difficult to understand at times.