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Hi Comfort, see also the attached. I appreciate your efforts, and it seems like you made some efforts to incorporate some attention to state-specific information, which is a good start. However, most of this still seems to be focused on this as a general and/or federal issue. Keep in mind this is for a lobbying plan to address legislation specific to your state. Keep in mind you need to convince people you know what has been executed in your state and what needs to be addressed in your state -currently- related to the legislation of focus. This likewise needs to be supported by more sources that are current state-focused authoritative sources. So, at very least addressing more substantively the progress made in your state more currently as well as what has not been done in your state that needs to be addressed would be needed. There is brief attention to that overall, but that needs to be the focus. Some of this is a good start. However, many of the same issues persist that really do compromise your content including needed attention to more state-specific research, needed editing (grammar and APA style), etc. Please make corrections as needed including -all- of these areas. If you do, it seems you could do reasonably well still. I look forward to reading your next assignment. Dr.H

(0.76 / 1.00); : Develops an Introduction, with Description of Setting and Statement of Objectives

Basic - Develops an adequate introduction, with clear description of setting and statement of objectives.

(2.24 / 3.50); : Develops an Argument Section for the Lobbying Plan, Including All Required Components as Specified in This Section

Below Expectations - Develops a minimal argument section, including some detail in the explanation, analysis, and examples as specified in this section.

(2.24 / 3.50); : Develops an Action Section for the Lobbying Plan, Including All Required Components as Specified in this Section

Below Expectations - Develops a minimal action section, including some detail in the explanation, analysis, and examples as specified in this section.

(0.76 / 1.00); : Develops a Conclusion

Basic - Develops an adequate, logical conclusion.

(1.14 / 1.50); : Written Communication: Control of Syntax and Mechanics

Basic - Displays basic comprehension of syntax and mechanics, such as spelling and grammar. Written work contains a few errors which may slightly distract the reader.

(0.96 / 1.50); : Written Communication: APA Formatting

Below Expectations - Fails to exhibit basic knowledge of APA formatting. There are frequent errors, making the layout difficult to distinguish as APA.

(2.28 / 3.00); : Written Communication: Resource Requirement

Basic - Uses less than the required number of sources to support ideas. Some sources may not be scholarly. Most sources on the reference page are used within the body of the assignment. Citations may not be formatted correctly.

Overall Score: 10.38 / 15.00 Overall Grade: 10.38