week 2 research paper

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22.5 (30.00%)

Points Range:22 (29.33333%) - 23 (30.66666%)

Paper reflects doctoral level treatment of the subject with growing understanding of concepts and use of technical terminology. It includes references to required reading(s) and attempts to integrate them into the writing. Page length requirement was partially met.

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No reference to or interaction with the required video presentation for this module.

Organization and Structure

Points:22.5 (30.00%)

Points Range:22 (29.33333%) - 23 (30.66666%)

Paper has a structure with some headings that make it easy to read and follow the flow of thought.

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Missing sub-headings to identify themes/topics as you address them.

Paper Style

Points:19.5 (26.00%)

Points Range:19 (25.33333%) - 20 (26.66666%)

Paper is relatively free from errors of spelling, syntax, and grammar. Paper has a Liberty University approved cover sheet and references list that conforms substantially to current APA formatting.

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Some of the article titles in your References list are not in lower case as prescribed by APA. Some of your journal titles are not in italics.