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COMPETENCY: Communicate in a manner that is scholarly, professional, and respectful of the diversity, dignity, and integrity of others, and that is consistent with expectations for health care professionals.

CRITERION: Write clearly and logically, with correct use of spelling, grammar, punctuation, and mechanics.

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Does not write clearly and logically, with correct use of spelling, grammar, punctuation, and mechanics.

Faculty Comments:“errors in grammar or sentence structure detract from the clarity of your writing making it difficult for the reader to follow. Your tutor and the writing center should be very helpful for this.”

CRITERION: Write following APA style for in-text citations, quotes, and references.

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Writes following APA style for in-text citations, quotes, and references with some errors and lapses.

Faculty Comments:“errors in in-text citation, many errors in reference page running head font.”

COMPETENCY: Apply scholarly information through critical thinking to solve problems in the field of health care.

CRITERION: Analyze a health care problem or issue by describing the context, explaining why it is important, and identifying populations affected by it.

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Identifies a health care problem or issue but does not analyze it.

Faculty Comments:“A deeper analysis is needed. Once again , errors in grammar or sentence structure detract from the clarity of your writing making it difficult for the reader to follow. Your tutor and the writing center should be very helpful for this.”

CRITERION: Discuss potential solutions for a health care problem or issue and describe what would be required to implement a solution.

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Incompletely or inaccurately discusses potential solutions for a health care problem or issue and what would be required to implement a solution.

Faculty Comments:“Elaborate on these solutions a little more - how will they be developed , financially supported.”

COMPETENCY: Apply ethical principles and academic standards to the study of health care.

CRITERION: Analyze the ethical implications if a potential solution to a health care problem or issue was implemented.

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Does not analyze the ethical implications if a potential solution to a health care problem or issue was implemented.

Faculty Comments:“I did not see an analysis of the ethical implications of your solution.”

COMPETENCY: Apply information literacy and library research skills to obtain scholarly information in the field of health care.

CRITERION: Use scholarly information to describe and explain a health care problem or issue and identify possible causes for it.

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Describes a health care problem or issue but does not explain it, or identifies possible causes for a problem or issues but the identification is incomplete or inaccurate.

Faculty Comments:“More robust application of your scholarly resources can assist in your presentation and analysis of the healthcare problem and critical thinking”