composition analysis

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This is what the professor wants me to do !!!!!!!!

Hi, Daysi. In this essay, you discussed your selection from the poems this week. This week your goal was to identify the “theme” of the poem and then to provide some support from the point that helps to explain your main points. You have a good rough draft. You can now go back to review where you can add in more details and analysis to build your case. Develop each paragraph in the essay and provide a full explanation of your ideas.

Thank you for the work you put into this essay. Remember, the grade you earn on the rough draft may not be the grade on the final. You will need to work on a good revision of your essay. You can review my comments in the thread where you posted your essay.

The second part of the assignment was for you to provide 2 peer reviews for your classmate. You did not provide the peer reviews for your classmates. This is an integral part of the writing process and will allow you to build your own skills as a writer and editor.