Make Changes on Essay

This is a fine analysis of the power of this story's well-crafted imagery, Angelica. You start out with a great description of the power of scene in fiction to transport readers to another place, and then you give good attention to several descriptive passages in the story. You do a good job contrasting the imagined scenes with Martha and the scenes of war that LT Cross experiences in the moment. 

But there's something missing. You need to add a paragraph on the scene where he burns Martha's letters, because that's the story's crisis scene, and it's central to understanding the story's message about the emotional sacrifice of young men in combat, who can't afford the luxury of having a crush on a girl like other guys their age.