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2020/11/24 Grades for Taoning Zhang: Fal20 ENGL 001A #72534 READING AND COMPOSITION-Online

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Mc-H Chapter 8 Assignment Oct 30 by 11:59pm 5

HOTS Chapter 10 Nov 5 by 11:59pm 5

Paper #3-Choose Your Problem (Causes/Solutions) Nov 6 by 11:59pm 5

Works Cited Draft Nov 6 by 11:59pm 5

HOTS Chapter 11 Nov 12 by 11:59pm 5

Final Draft Paper #2 Nov 13 by 11:59pm 15

Mc-H Chapter 9 Assignment Nov 13 by 11:59pm 5

HOTS Chapter 12 Nov 19 by 11:59pm 5

1st Draft Paper #3 Nov 19 by 11:59pm 5

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Hello Taoning,

Please see attached. I will send this to your canvas inbox as well.

Thank you. Download outline for essay.docx

Estrella Argueta, Nov 20 at 5:26pm

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2020/11/24 Grades for Taoning Zhang: Fal20 ENGL 001A #72534 READING AND COMPOSITION-Online

https://canvas.pasadena.edu/courses/1107618/grades 4/5

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Hello Taoning,

Please see attached. I will send this to your canvas inbox as well.

Thank you.

Estrella Argueta, Nov 20 at 5:26pm

Hey Tao! I’ve read your rough draft and you seem to be on the right track! I really like the topic you had chose for this essay, You should add more details on the orcas and more of a background history on it, good luck on your essay!

Christopher Hernandez, Nov 21 at 8:47pm

Peer editing was done and 1st draft was turned in on time. Full credit.

Remember the structure of this paper:

Intro #1 - defend the idea that this problem you are going to write about is a legitimate one to read. 3/4 page.

Intro #2 - Show a brief history as to when this problem began. 3/4 page

Body Paragraphs #1- #6 - You should have three consecutive causes (follow Order of Importance) as to why this problem is happening. You should then have three consecutive solutions as to how to fix the problem (follow Order of Importance). Finally, the causes and the solutions should be parallel--in other words, each solution should be a direct resolution for each cause.

Conclusion - Finally prove without any question that this problem is important.

2nd draft should be a new and improved 2-page Informal Outline.

The Final Draft must be within 6-8 full pages.

Works Cited is required for all 2nd drafts and Final Drafts.

Please have our Reference Library staff help you out in order to locate high-level research.

2nd Draft is due by Wednesday, November 25, 2020 at 11:59pm.

Finally, whether you received peer feedback or not, you absolutely must go get online help from the Writing Center. Doing this will help in getting more focused as to the requirements of this paper.

Good luck, Prof. Agregán

Luis Agregán, Nov 23 at 12:50am

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