persuasive essay

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Week 7 Writing Activity 3

See clickable scoring rubric above for point value.

This is a good start. The final draft will need considerable development. Notice the example in the Webtext is 8 pages. Be sure you have a clear thesis that states your position so readers will understand what you're arguing for.

Remember, this is your essay. You are no longer discussing your audience. However, if you're arguing for mental health screenings in public schools, then you would not be addressing the students. Make sure your thesis clearly states what you're arguing for.

Never end a paragraph with a citation. Always provide an explanation of the borrowed material.

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This is a good start. The final draft will need considerable development. Notice the example in the Webtext is 8 pages. Be sure you have a clear thesis that states your position so readers will understand what you're arguing for.