Final Exam
Menomt05
Problem_Air-Conditioning_Tube_Room1.docxProf King
Bus Writing
Sample Problem: Air-Conditioning in the Tube Room
Read the following, comment on the negative aspects/weaknesses and then RE-WRITE it to include a solution and more positive language.
To: Jennifer m. Kirkland, Operations Vice-President
From: Arnold M. Morgan, Production Supervisor
Subject: Request for Air-Conditioning The Tube room
Please put air-conditioning in the tube room. This past summer, 2/3 of our eployees quite because it was so hot. It’s not fair that they should work in unbearable temperatures when management sits in air-conditioned comfort.
I propose that we solve this problem by air-conditioning the tube room to bring dpwm temps to 78%.
Insultating and air-conditioning the tube room would cost $500,000.
Please approve this requet immediately!
