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· Though informative, your intro is very broad and doesn’t really draw in an audience.

· You talk about Kim Kardashian’s power as a celebrity but you don’t directly analyze ethos, logos, or pathos in the movement or how it applies to her and the movement in order to enact change.

· I think there needed to be at least one or two more resources for people to get involved with to help with prison reform.

· Be more informative about prison reform