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A2. Sociodemographic Profile Introductory Paragraph:

· Identification of the source of the data is not provided from the table, and identification of the county is not present. Please identify the location being discussed as well as the source that the data was collected from.

B1. County Health Trends & Rankings Introductory Paragraph

· Identification of the source of the data is not provided. Please expand the discussion to identify where the data came from.

· (Extra info) Complete the “Introductory Paragraph” subsection (suggested length of 1–2 paragraphs), including why the data for the health trends in part B2 were collected and identifying the source of the data and the methods used to gather the data.

B3. Health Trends (Visual Graphs)

· All seven health trends are not provided, and a description that explains the importance of the health trend on the population is not identified.

· (Extra info) Complete the “Health Trends (Visual Graphs)” subsection, including one trend graph for each of the selected health trends.

B4. . Health Trends Discussion

· A discussion that explains how each of the seven trends tells a story about the health of the county is not evident.

· (Extra info) Complete the “Health Trends Discussion” subsection (suggested length of 1–2 paragraphs), including how each of the trend graphs tell a story about the health of the county and how the health aspect is improving, worsening, or remaining stable.

C1. . Health Factors Table

· A table is properly identified with several data points event. Data regarding the ratio of primary care physicians are not provided.

· (Extra info) Complete the 14 items in the “Health Factors Table” subsection for the selected county, the top U.S. performer, and the state.

C2. . Comparison of Data

· An analysis of how the county is doing in relation to the U.S. top performers and state data is not present.

· (Extra info) Complete the “Comparison of Data” subsection (suggested length of 1–2 paragraphs), including an analysis of background information on health rankings and the purpose of comparing county data to the top performers.

D2. Action Plan(s)

· An action plan is clearly present and explains that the state will prohibit drinking and driving. Initial steps that will need to happen to begin implementing the action plan is not detailed. Please provide initial steps that are required to begin implementing the action plan.

· (Extra info) Complete the “Action Plan(s)” subsection (suggested length of 1–2 sentences), including the initial steps needed for implementing an action plan to address the main health trend in part D1.

D2b. Public Awareness and Public Engagement

· Launching online campaigns and targeting a specific audience is an appropriate way to raise public awareness. Two additional ways in which the advanced professional nurse can use technology to integrate informatics into practice to raise public awareness is not detailed.

· (Extra info) Complete the “Raise Public Awareness and Promote Public Engagement” subsection (suggested length of 1–2 paragraphs), including a description of three ways that the advanced professional nurse should use technology to integrate informatics into practice.

D2c. . Monitoring and Evaluating an Action Plan

· A singular sentence is present and explains that the action plan will be monitored by visiting the rehabilitation centers. A summary that thoroughly explains what tools will be used to gather, evaluate, and report on the progress of the action plan is not evident.

· (Extra info) Complete the “Monitoring and Evaluating Action Plan” subsection (suggested length of 1–2 paragraphs), including a summary of how the elements of the proposed action plan from parts D2a and D2b will be monitored.

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