CRITICAL R

Managing Poor Hand Hygiene in Hospitals

PART TO BE REVIEW AND CORRECTIONS TO BE MAKE

1- Page 2. First paragrapgh.. the last sentence … ‘Many hospitals, including my organization, are struggling with this poor health practice of poor hand hygiene.’ The word “my” ( whose organisation?)

Page 4. First sentence in the first paragraph… “, including my organization,

Page 5. First paragraph .. the last sentence .. “ . Implementing the intervention that enhances hand hygiene compliance addresses”……….. ? ( not a finished sentence, it was incomplete sentence)….

Page 6 … the last sentence on this page 6 .. under Professional Expertise/Experience…..

‘Most health organizations are reluctant to hand hygiene, especially among healthcare professionals?’ … Looks at this sentence for structure and meaning you want to say……

Page 7 first paragraph.. fourth line… ‘Many hospitals, including my organization’….. whose organisation?....

Also the last sentence on Page 7… first paragraph… “ Caregivers should observe handwashing before handling an inversive patient care device, and touching the patient after contact with the patient's body fluid, non-intact skin, mucous membrane, and wound dressing…. ( replace the word “inversive” … this word doesn’t connect or give meaning to the reader/marker of what you are trying to say.