Persuasive Essay 4 page
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PersuasiveEssaysStructure1.pptxPersuasive Essays Structure
First paragraph
Thesis (your statement/position)
Supporting statement
Supporting statement
Supporting Statement
Second paragraph
Supporting statement 1
Supporting statement 1.1
Supporting statement 1.2
Supporting statement 1.3
Third Paragraph
Supporting statement 2
Supporting statement 2.1
Supporting statement 2.2
Supporting statement 2.3
Fourth paragraph
Supporting statement 3
Supporting statement 3.1
Supporting statement 3.2
Supporting statement 3.3
Fifth paragraph
Support statement 1
Support statement 2
Support Statement 3
Closing (strong) your thesis/position
Example
Apple business model
First paragraph
Apple’s business model is the most successful model in the electronics industry
Design of cool products
Interoperability of applications
I tunes strategy
Second paragraph
Design of cool products
All products are very nice looking
All products are high quality high performance products
Even the stores, the Apple stores, are cool
Third paragraph
Interoperability of applications
User can have the same applications in the Iphone, the Ipad, and the Ipod.
If you buy a new hardware…you have access to your same apps
Once that you learn one app.. you are productive in all platforms
Forth paragraph
I tunes strategy
Complements your HW, music, apps, space.
Electronic market for apps: developers and buyers
Absolute control over apps quality
Fifth paragraph
Design of cool products
Interoperability of applications
I tunes strategy
A successful business model should translate into profits. Apple has 60 billion Dollars cash and they also have the most successful business model in the electronics industry.
