Persuasive essay - i have made a essay, now i want to improve it to the teachers need ref. to sample paper

I. Introduction

a. Attention-getter (what quote, question, or statistic do you plan to use to get your reader’s attention?):

b. Thesis Statement (must include topic, point, and reasons):

II. Body Paragraphs

a. Paragraph 1 Topic:

i. Support (from articles or personal experience):

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b. Paragraph 2 Topic:

i. Support (from articles or personal experience):

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c. Paragraph 3 Topic:

i. Support (from articles or personal experience):

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d. Paragraph 4 (counter-argument #1):

i. Counter-argument (what is one argument AGAINST your thesis?)

ii. Source (who makes this counter-argument)?

iii. Rebuttal (how will you respond to this counter-argument?)

a. Support (from articles or personal experience):

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e. Paragraph 5 (counter-argument #2):

i. Counter-argument (what is another argument AGAINST your thesis?)

ii. Source (who makes this counter-argument)?

iii. Rebuttal (how will you respond to this counter-argument?)

a. Support (from articles or personal experience):

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