Persuasive essay - i have made a essay, now i want to improve it to the teachers need ref. to sample paper

Introduction has a hook and brief background information

Thesis statement is the last sentence of introduction and includes TOPIC + POINT + REASONS

Has a background paragraph that gives enough information to understand the problem

First body paragraph has a topic sentence with a controlling idea

First body paragraph has enough information and examples to support the topic sentence

First body paragraph has enough explanation to show how the information supports the thesis

Second body paragraph has a topic sentence with a controlling idea

Second body paragraph has enough information and examples to support the topic sentence

Second body paragraph has enough explanation to show how the information supports the thesis

All paragraphs include citations.

Conclusion includes a call to action or prediction for the future