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Title: Stop Texting While Driving

I. Introduction

A. Be careful: STOP TEXT MESSAGING WHILE DRIVING.

B. Listener Relevance: In certain states driving text is unconstitutional, and we nevertheless do it.

C. Speaker credibility: Families, colleagues, citizens in daily life have lost somebody they love, because the driver has decided to submit a text instead of staring at the lane. Centers for Disease Control and Prevention (CDC) estimates that in 2015, upwards of 2,5 million patients were admitted in emergency departments (EDs) after motor vehicle accidents (MVCs) (Ferdinand, Aftab & Akinlotan, 2019).

D. Thesis Statement: I'm starting today by explaining how Texting is a problem; would you not be a text while driving with a solution?

1. Need

1. Today, society faces this crippling dilemma

2. In 2016 nearly 3500 people died and 391 000 were hurt by impaired text driving (Ferdinand, Aftab & Akinlotan, 2019)

3. According to a research carried out (White & Bronsburg, 2016), the effect of boredom, social relations, social anxiety and social happiness on the driver of that text has been examined. The dilemma has an effect on our existence as a family may sense the circumstance text and push it at home.

4. This is not considered by many as a concern.

5. They're incorrect, I agree, because we're carving statistics.

6. In addition, a systematic analysis of the literature examined by peers on distracted driving showed that 165 research examining the link between cellular and driving efficiency found that cellular usage was correlated with adverse driving performance (98 percent) (Ferdinand, Aftab & Akinlotan, 2019)

Now that I told you about the problem. I will discuss solutions as we move forward. (transition)

2. Satisfaction

A. There are penalties for text; the latest results are aligned with the belief that an improvement in text punishment would be an efficient way to decrease the conduct (Hayashi, Friedel, Foreman & Wirth, 2019)

B. To date, law has been introduced to restrict all vehicles from text driving in 47 states and Columbia District (Governors Highway Safety Association).

C. Some people claim it won't work. I disagree since certain tactics such as the educational initiative, such as U Drive U Text, U Pay. (NHTSA, [55]), have been placed together, and there is still no proof that this was successful.

A. Now that we have talked about some solution, lets visualized how the world would be a better place once we implement changes to texting and driving.

3. Visualization

A. The pictures illustrate how each of us might be impaired if we do not obey the approach of not driving whilst texting. Imagine how better driving is if we don't type a text while driving. This would be a happier planet until a solution is set in motion.

4. Action

A. I addressed today how texting and driving was a concern with a remedy. Our highway would be a better environment for and of us as long as we join together to avoid texting while driving.

B. Texting has led family members, acquaintances, because of speeding and texting, to fall into an accident. No loved one needs to get the call that, because of texting and driving, somebody they respect is not coming home. The only way to avoid this is that we stop.

C. Lives would be endangered if you choose to drive and message.

D. If we observe the warnings of not texting while driving, that would lower the mortality risk. Stop texting when driving is what we need to achieve collectively and there is little direct attempt to indicate and usefulness in the media and initiative (Hayashi, Friedel, Foreman & Wirth, 2019)

E. I assume that everyone has been touched by this speech and the need not to text when driving would make a difference.

References

Ferdinand, A. O., Aftab, A., & Akinlotan, M. A. (2019). Texting-While-Driving Bans and Motor Vehicle Crash–Related Emergency Department Visits in 16 US States: 2007–2014. American Journal of Public Health109(5), 748–754. https://doi-org.ezproxy.ccu.edu/10.2105/AJPH.2019.304999

Hayashi, Y., Friedel, J. E., Foreman, A. M., & Wirth, O. (2019). A Behavioral Economic Analysis of Demand for Texting while Driving. Psychological Record69(2), 225. https://doi-org.ezproxy.ccu.edu/10.1007/s40732-019-00341-w

White, N., & Bronsburg, S. (2019). Using Data Analytics to Further Understand the Role that Boredom, Loneliness, Social Anxiety, Social Gratification, and Social Relationships (BRAG) Play in a Driver’s Decision to Text. Retrieved 10 November 2019, from https://nsuworks.nova.edu/hpd_com_faculty_articles/1441/

Wiederhold, Brenda K. CyberPsychology, Behavior & Social Networking. Aug2016, Vol. 19 Issue 8, p473-474. 2p. DOI: 10.1089/cyber.2016.29046.bkw. , Database: Academic Search Premier