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M2 Personal Response Worksheet

Student Name

· Before you begin, check your CORE course pack pp. 19-20 and think about how you want to respond to your prompt.

· Also, before you write your thesis, check the thesis structure and examples in your CORE course pack p 21.

Outlining Stage

Shine’s Feedback

(What to improve?)

Thesis Statement:

- A: Key word [noun]

- B: Supporting details (Roadmap)

- C: Overall reaction

- Prompt with quotation marks

Background (One additional source)

1) Context (where/when):

2) Who were mainly involved in the historical event(s) related to your prompt:

3) 3~4 Important Historical Facts:

- Relevant information to the prompt?

- Missing citation or quotation marks

or page numbers?

- Sufficient historical facts?

Body 1 (Assertion key words: )

1) Evidence:

- Match the order of the roadmap in

the thesis?

- Suitable assertion key words?

- Evidence directly from the primary

source?

- Suitable evidence to support your

thesis?

- Proper citation?

Body 2 (Assertion key words: )

1) Evidence:

- Match the order of the roadmap in

the thesis?

- Suitable assertion key words?

- Evidence directly from the primary

source?

- Suitable evidence to support your

thesis?

- Proper citation?

Body 3 (Assertion key words: )

1) Evidence:

- Match the order of the roadmap in

the thesis?

- Suitable assertion key words?

- Evidence directly from the primary

source?

- Suitable evidence to support your

thesis?

- Proper citation?

References (Primary Source + ONE additional source in APA)

- Primary source list?

- One additional source list?

- Correct APA?

Introduction (Draft)

Background (Draft)

Body Paragraphs (Draft)

Conclusion (Draft)

Shine Hong (2021 SU) 2