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My background

When I was child, my parents not always stay at home, because they are work very hard and they do not have time to take care me and my sister. They just hire a housekeeper and a driver to take care us, they can help me and my sister do anything. At that time, my personality was very bad and do not know how to do something by myself. My parents are more focus on the their business, because my parents want to give us a better life. They do not know how bad are his son these. They let me go to united state to study when I was 16 years old. I’m not sure that is lucky or bad. But one thing I know that is no different, because my parents are always not home. I feel not lovely in the world. Until my parents are come to my bedroom that before last night I come to united state. They are talk to me and apologize to me for do not take care me and did not give me enough love, they example what happen and why they are so busy. Me can my parents both crying. That time I feel really lovely and lucky, but they forgot to take can their children.

after one year, I come back my home, I just like a adult and very mature. My parents see me like a adult, all the act are totally difference. They just ask me what are you learn and how the teacher teach you. I just very pride of me that my parents will said something like that. I come to united state that totally change my life, because I have to do anything by myself and also I have to make new friends. Most international students have a privileged family, so nobody feels superiority because every one are some. This affect me to try to make a friends to help myself. First, I have to change my behavior because I’m the prince in my home, then I have to use to it that I’m same to author. Also I have to fix the relationship if we have argument. Because of that, I become a sociable person and everyone like make friends with me. At the school, I always talk to the new students and let then feel really comfortable in our school.

Fortunately, I can talk to my parents like brother and sister. That mean I feel really comfortable to talk to them.