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IHRM issues Pepsi had when they entered the UAE. Stay close to your topic—Pepsi—by putting it first in your paragraphs. Talk about the actual issues Pepsi had first, then analyse those issues using Hofestede etc, then make recommendations. 

Hope that helps!

Darren 

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What organisation? Do you mean Pepsi? Or organisations in general? 

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Again, what organisation? Pepsi? 

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How do these two sentences link together? The first talks about "adverts failing" and the second about "the language barrier"?  

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Check APA referencing. 

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But what was the actual challenge Pepsi had with recruiting staff? Could they not find staff? 

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But how does this paragraph relate to actual problems Pepsi had? 

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But how does this relate to problems Pepsi had when they entered the UAE? 

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What "strong beliefs"? And how do "strong beliefs" in one country, the UAE, explain why "alcoholic drinks are prohibited in Muslim societies"? 

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How do these sentences link together? 

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The last sentence in a paragraph should summarise the paragraph and link to the next paragraph. 

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"One of the most significant challenges ... was costly" what? 

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Spacing and check APA. 

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"There will be no tension and dissatisfaction ... leading to high turnover"? 

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