Week 1 Discussion 2: Making Logical Inferences and Identifying Facts in Fiction

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Reading Ret’sepile Makamane’s Damien’s Shoes, I can make the following logical inferences based on its details:

1, Damien, who died in 1994 when he was 10 years old, was the narrator’s son. This inference is based on the statements: “My son, Damien,...”, “He has remained ten years old throughout the years...”, “...that unlike other undead dead people...”, "That was back in ninety-four”, etc.

2, They live in Rwanda based on the information: “He moves about the shores of Lake Muhazi”( a lake in Rwanda), “ People who travel to Kayonza come back to Kigali”( Kigali is the capital of Rwanda and Kayonza is a town in Rwanda), “Not here in Rwanda, not anymore!”, and “Because God used to sleep here in Rwanda”. So, the story happened in Rwanda.

3, The narrator, Damien’s father, is suffering from the sorrow and grief of the loss of his son. The narrator states, “I was still a young man in those days”, “I have aged double while walking these hills and valleys...”, “Walking with a tormented soul, looking for Damien to put on his shoe on the other foot”, and “Blaming myself, sixteen years moiling and roiling through these mangroves and swamps, looking on every street corner, every pathway.” All of these statements signify that the narrator loves and misses his son deeply and feels endless bitter and agonized, as he also says, “I asked for my own death” and “I went ahead and died from grief”.

4, Damien might die in June 1994 because the narrator mentions June several times: “throughout rainy June nights”, “when it rains in June”, “if it was not for June”.

5, when Damien died, he wore only one shoe, another shoe was caught and taken away by a stray dog, based on the statements: “I carry with me Damien’s one shoe”, “Walking with a tormented soul, looking for Damien to put on his shoe on the other foot”, “He is barefoot”, “I rescued this shoe from the mouth of a stray dog”, “...give my son his shoe”, “Damien, here is your other shoe – wear them both, son.” Furthermore, this inference should be the most important part of this story.

B

Here are some of my inferences I made based upon the short story “Damien’s Shoes”

The narrator in the story reveals that it is Damien’s father wherein 1994, the narrator implied that he “..was still a young man in those days” chasing a stray dog to rescue Damien’s shoe. For sixteen years in searching for his son, blaming himself for losing Damien, the narrator even implied, “I cannot even walk to that damn lake to give my son his shoe. I am stuck. Because I asked for my own death, and when they refused, I went ahead and died from grief.” With such worries and troubles that he feels without his son, it infers that the father is completely hopeless to return the shoe, from asking people about Damien’s whereabouts, they would not accept him thinking that he is a lunatic when in the beginning they have already told him where he could have been at.

In the story, Damien reveals to be an innocent child that enjoys being alone throughout the rainy June nights. From moving around the shores of Lake Muhazi, he would light a fire and play his flute into the night, describing him as, “a child blowing all his young soul into a musical instrument just so our land can heal”. This can also imply about his spirit that lingers off in the land that he lives in (Rwanda) and that he may have died peacefully in playing a melody that is “so piercing, with sorrow so intense”. Along with that, he may have died at an early young age as the story implies, “He has remained ten years old through the years, only bits of his hair are beginning to grey now.”

Lastly, the setting has taken place in Rwanda where I believe that it is the homeland of Damien and his father lived due to the journey Damien’s father has encountered to look for his son. His father went through, “these hills and valleys with acacia and guava and mango trees” and “rolling through these mangroves and swamps.” Along with being in Rwanda, the story references much about June and its rain and the rain can resemble a negative outlook or sadness. Like Damien’s father who could not bear the pain of losing his son and Damien’s flute playing to God represented such sorrow as both are in the means of ending their lives and the grievances they bear in this short story.