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Thesis statement: Traditional value standards and appearance are some reasons cause discrimination in LGBT community

Annotated Bibliography

“The impact of discrimination” Beyond Blue ,27 January 2015, beyondblue.org.au/who-does-it-affect/lesbian-gay-bi-trans-and-intersex-lgbti-people/the-impact-of-discrimination

This a website that includes articles about racism in LGBT community. The idea of this argument shows how depression and concerns about social stereotypes the LGBT people feel when other people around them look and racist on them. For this reason, LGBT teenagers are trying to hide their feelings from their family and friends. Because of the lack of understanding about this community, other people sparked stigma with the LGBT community, and make their life become a trouble. In this article, we have learned the different in discrimination. Moreover, everything we say or do will affect the LGBT people can lead to negative health, including higher rates of depression, anxiety.

the author supports this idea by showing the evidence from our life, violence at work, school, and other social situations. That are all the things that LGBT people have experience in every day in their life. This article was written in 2015. At that time, not a lot of people are open minded, there are still mixed opinions and ideas, even openly disdain and offend people in this community. The leader of the page Beyond Blue has been searched and interviewed some LGBT people. The article includes statistics, and quotes experts from the real people and real stories. The writer experience is enough. I found no grammatical or spelling errors. The purpose of this article is the impact of discrimination in LGBT people is dangerous and this can cause so many feeling problems, especially, the mental health about being rejected. Moreover, prompt people to stop discrimination, and what you say will attack them, we need to respect them because we are human.

Mollman,Steve .“LGBT is a disease, not a human rights-a growing movement in Indonesia reject gay rights”, SBS,18 Feb 2016, sbs.com.au/topics/sexuality/article/2016/02/17/lgbt-disease-not-human-right-growing-movement-indonesia-rejects-gay-rights

This article talks about some Indonesian people still openly anti-LGBT. Many people

in Indonesia are happy because of their nation's acceptance of all kinds of people. The

However, a growing number of Twitter posts with the hashtag #TolakLGBT in recent

day Tolak means “reject”. Moreover, they called LGBT is a disease. This article

describe. The way other people do something bad to LGBT people like a group of

people put up the banner to remind LGBT people stay away from them. The article

was written in 2016 at 9:11AM. I am reading this article because this is the one that

write about how strong discrimination in LGBT people in Indonesia by Steve

Mollmon. His experience is not enough for me because there are so many mixed

opinion in his argument. Which means the positive and negative in the same

paragraph. I think it is better if he separates the pros and cons into separate paragraph

However, he is very good at pointing the time and the picture that can support his

evidence. The purpose of this article is about racism is spreading more and more, for

them, the toxic LGBT culture is enveloping young people.

Yamaguchi, Mari. “LGBT groups want equality law in Japan before Tokyo Olympics”. ABC NEWS, 25 March 2021, abcnews.go.com/Sports/wireStory/lgbt-groups-equality-law-japan-tokyo-olympics-76672764

This news article talks about a group of LBGT people and others are standing up and

submitting a petition signature to Japan’s ruling party. They want to be equal before

Olympic happens. The published day is March 25 at 5:37AM. The author of this

article, Mari Yamaguchi is experience enough. There is no mistake or error about this

article. At the end of article, we can see the author’s twitter,

twitter.com/mariyamaguchi. The important information in ties argument is everybody

submitted their signature to take the equality for LGBT community. Based on the

end of the article, there are some mixed comments. The purpose of this article

talks about how that supporters are increasing, however, lacks legal protections.

Hello Ngan Nguyen,

 Your annotated bibliography assignment is the same format as the template the professor gave us a great job on that. Also, you follow and met the requirements of the assignment to give at least three sources. I noticed some mistake in the course code, It is "ENGL 1302 NOT ENG 1301". Your thesis statement needs more points to attract the reader. However, you have a good topic and it is a big discussion for a society that needs more attention.