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Criteria
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Unacceptable
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Revisions Required
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Target
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Your Feedback
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1. Signature Project Stage 1: Are the focus and purpose clear?
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1 Points
Missing thesis; confusion about or misunderstanding of topic; no sense of purpose
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2 Points
Simplistic and unfocused ideas; limited sense of purpose
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3 Points
Developed thesis; represents sound understanding of the assigned topic; focused
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I understand the purpose of the study.
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2. Signature Project Stage 1: Are ideas clear and well supported?
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1 Points
Absence of support for main points
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2 Points
Support is provided, but is not specific; support is only loosely relevant to the main points
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3 Points
Ideas sufficiently supported; support is sound, valid, and logical
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Your ideas are supported by evidence.
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3. Signature Project Stage 1: Is the writing structured and well organized?
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1 Points
No paragraph structure; or single, rambling paragraph; or series of isolated paragraphs
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2 Points
Organization is confusing or disjointed; weak paragraph structure; transitions are missing or inappropriate
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3 Points
Clear organizational structure; easily followed; includes transitions; structured format
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Paragraphs are organized appropriately.
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4. Signature Project Stage 1: Did the writer consider audience and tone?
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1 Points
No awareness of appropriate audience for assignment; tone is inappropriate
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2 Points
Lacks awareness of appropriate audience for the assignment; tone is inconsistent
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3 Points
Effective and accurate awareness of audience; tone is appropriate for audience and assignment
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5. Signature Project Stage 1: Do appendices include necessary documentation?
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1 Points
Most items required in the appendices are not presented in the appendices; the plan and necessary steps to protect human subjects in research are not clear.
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2 Points
Most required items are presented in the appendices; items and a plan somewhat demonstrate ethical practices in protection of human subjects.
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3 Points
All required items are presented in the appendices; items clearly demonstrate ethical practices in protection of human subjects.
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Perhaps teacher observations forms are necessary
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6. Signature Project Stage 1: Are proper mechanics utilized? Is correct sentence structure utilized?
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1 Points
Frequent errors in spelling and capitalization; intrusive and/or inaccurate punctuation; communication is hindered. Contains multiple and serious errors of sentence structure: i.e. fragments, run-ons. Unable to write simple sentences.
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2 Points
Contains several punctuation, spelling, and/or capitalization errors (up to 6); errors interfere with meaning; formulaic sentence patterns or overuse of simple sentences; errors in sentence structure.
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3 Points
Virtually free of punctuation, spelling, capitalization errors (no more than 3); errors do not interfere with meaning; effective and varied sentences; errors (if present) due to lack of careful proofreading; complex sentences are written correctly.
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7. Signature Project Stage 1: Are vocabulary and word usage varied and appropriate?
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1 Points
Vocabulary is unsophisticated; or subject specific vocabulary or sophisticated vocabulary used incorrectly
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2 Points
Proper, but simple vocabulary used; subject specific vocabulary used infrequently
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3 Points
Vocabulary is varied, specific and appropriate; uses subject specific vocabulary correctly
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8. Signature Project Stage 1: Is proper evidence and support of original work provided in body of the review?
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1 Points
Turnitin or Safe Assign report indicates match percentage of greater than 25 percent.
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2 Points
Turnitin or Safe Assign report indicates match percentage of 15 to 25 percent.
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3 Points
Turnitin or Safe Assign report indicates a match percentage of less than 15 percent.
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9. Signature Project Stage 1: Is APA format followed?
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1 Points
There are significant format errors present ; multiple (more than 6) of APA formatting errors; in the reference list and/or in-text citations;
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2 Points
Fewer than 6 APA format errors are present in the reference list in-text; citations; header; headings; page numbers; etc.
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3 Points
There are virtually no APA format errors present in either reference list in-text; citations; header; headings; page numbers; etc.
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Some APA format needs to be corrected specifically for in text citations.
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10. Signature Project Stage 1: Source of data is credible and data is representative of the scope requirements for the advanced degree being sought. (InTASC 6, 9; CAEP A1.1)
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1 Points
The source of the data is ambiguous or lacks credibility; data does not allow for problem/weakness identification appropriate for required project scope
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2 Points
The source of the data is clear and credible; data does not allow for problem/weakness identification appropriate for required project scope
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3 Points
The source of the data is clear and credible; data allows for identification of an of a classroom, multi-classroom, school or district level problem/weakness appropriate to the required project scope
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It is a little unclear what the problem is specifically in regard to your class or school.
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11. Signature Project Stage 1: Graphical representation of compiled data allows for easy analysis. (CAEP A1.1)
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1 Points
Graphical format does not present the data in a clear manner; data is only partially presented
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2 Points
Graphical format(s) is appropriate and clearly presents all the collected data
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3 Points
Graphical format(s) is appropriate; clearly presents all the collected data; highlights visible patterns or trends
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Does “student performance” pertain to students that are not from low income families?
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12. Signature Project Stage 1: Identified problem/weakness is supported by trends or patterns seen in the data. (InTASC 6, 9, 10; CAEP A1.1)
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1 Points
Problem/weakness is not clearly identified or does not align with the trends and patterns identified in the data
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2 Points
Problem/weakness is clearly identified; aligns with the type of data collected, but connections between the trends/patterns in the data are not clearly described in the narrative
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3 Points
Problem/weakness is clearly identified; aligns with the type of data collected; clear connections between the trends/patterns are drawn in the narrative
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Some information about students from middle class families seems irrelevant.
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13. Signature Project Stage 1: Best practices are identified and supported by the literature as viable responses to weaknesses and problems represented by the data. (InTASC 8, 9, 10; CAEP A1.1)
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1 Points
Best practice(s) are not clearly identified; literature reviewed does not support the identified best practice(s) as a viable option to improve achievement
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2 Points
Best practice(s) are clearly identified; literature reviewed does not support the identified best practice(s) as a viable option to improve achievement
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3 Points
Best practice(s) are clearly identified; literature reviewed supports the identified best practices as viable responses to the problem/weakness identified
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Literature matches the identified problem.
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14. Signature Project Stage 1: Theories and/or trends are identified and connected with best practices in literature. (InTASC 8, 9, 10; CAEP A1.1)
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1 Points
Theory or trend is not identified; theory/trend identified are not connected with the best practice(s) via literature
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2 Points
Theory or trend is clearly identified; literature reviewed does not connect the identified theory/trend with the identified best practice
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3 Points
Theory or trend is clearly identified; literature reviewed connects the identified theory/trend with all identified best practices
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15. Signature Project Stage 1: Proper level of synthesis is achieved in the literature review. (InTASC 9, 10; CAEP A1.1)
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1 Points
Summaries were given; are not clear or fail to make clear connections with best practice(s) and/or theory/trend(s) identified as viable responses to problem/weakness
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2 Points
Summaries are clear and concise; clear connections with best practice and/or theory/trend identified as viable response to problem/weakness may or may not be present
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3 Points
Synthesis rather than summaries of content presented in the collection of sources is present, clear connections with best practice and/or theory/trend identified as viable response to problem/weakness present
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Add more details to explain best practices/theories/trends.
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16. Signature Project Stage 1: Proper number of sources requirement is met.
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1 Points
Source requirements for the appropriate level was not met
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2 Points
Meets minimum requirements for degree level: Master’s-A minimum of 10 sources were utilized;; Specialist’s- A minimum of 15 sources were utilized.
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3 Points
Five (5) sources beyond minimum requirements were utilized
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13 sources were cited
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17. Signature Project Stage 1: Collaborative resources are identified, explained and supported. (InTASC 1, 5, 10; CAEP A1.1)
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1 Points
Collaborative resources are ambiguous or not identified; resources may be identified, but no explanation related to their value or role is provided; the connection between the collaborative resource and the identified problem is not clear
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2 Points
Collaborative resource(s) is identified; explanation of value and role is provided, but the connection between the collaborative resource(s) and the identified problem is not clear
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3 Points
Collaborative resource(s) is identified; explanation of value and role is provided; connection between the collaborative resource(s) and the identified problem is clear
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Under “plan for protection” you stated one researcher would be responsible. In the “Collaborative Resources” section, you listed teachers. You also copied the same paragraph twice in that section.
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18. Signature Project Stage 1: Description of plan is clear and easy to follow. (InTASC 7, 9, 10; CAEP A1.1)
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1 Points
Action plan is not described; description is not clear; steps in plan are not in a logical order
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2 Points
Action plan description is provided, but additional detail may be warranted; steps in plan are outlined, but additional steps may be needed or the order could be altered for better efficiency
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3 Points
Action plan description is provided, and sufficient detail is included; steps in plan are outlined; exhaustive list of steps and sequence of steps allows for optimal efficiency and outcome
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19. Signature Project Stage 1: Project timeline accounts for all elements in the plan and allocates appropriate amounts of time for each element. (InTASC 7, 10; CAEP A1.1)
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1 Points
Project timeline is missing or incomplete; time allocation is inadequate or too extensive for one or more elements included in the plan
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2 Points
Project timeline is provided; all elements identified in the plan are included, but additional elements might be needed for an improved outcome; timing and/or time allocation could be improved
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3 Points
Project timeline is provided; all necessary elements are included for optimal outcome
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Will the plan be executed over ten weeks or five?
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20. Signature Project Stage 1: Variables are identified and defined. (CAEP A1.1)
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1 Points
Variables are misidentified
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2 Points
Variables are identified correctly, but with no clear definitions or explanations as to how they will be measured
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3 Points
Variables are identified correctly, with clear definitions and explanations as to how they will be measured
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21. Signature Project Stage 1: Required data needs are identified and plans for retrieving and protecting that data are clear. (i.e. methods) (InTASC 6, 9; CAEP A1.1)
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1 Points
Data needs are not identified or do not align with the problem; data retrieval plans are missing or inappropriate
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2 Points
Data needs are identified; data retrieval plans are included, but plans for protecting the data and/or student confidentiality are not provided or are inadequate
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3 Points
Data needs are identified; data retrieval plans are included; adequate plans for protecting student confidentiality and/or data are provided
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22. Signature Project Stage 1: Description of the sample and sampling techniques are provided. (CAEP A1.1)
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1 Points
Detailed descriptions of the participants are not given and/or sampling technique is not provided
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2 Points
Brief overview of the sample is given and sampling technique may or may not be included
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3 Points
Full descriptions of the participant sample, sampling technique and justifications for both the sample chosen and the sampling technique are given
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23. Signature Project Stage 1: Needed resources are identified, justified, and a leverage plan for acquiring resources is clear and supported. (InTASC 5, 9, 10; CAEP A1.1)
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1 Points
Resources are not identified or are inadequate; no justification for the resources is provided; unclear how identified resources might be acquired; plan for acquiring resources is inadequate or ill-conceived
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2 Points
Resources are identified, but additional resources may be needed; justification for the resources is provided, but leverage plan for acquiring resources is not clear
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3 Points
Exhaustive list of resources is identified; justification for the resources is provided; leverage plan for acquiring resources is outlined
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24. Signature Project Stage 1: Justification for how the action plan will address the identified problem is clear: (InTASC 9, 10; CAEP A1.1)
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1 Points
No connection between the action plan and the identified problem is provided
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2 Points
Connection between the action plan and the identified problem is provided
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3 Points
Connection between the action plan and the identified problem is provided; justification of that connection is included
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25. Signature Project Stage 1: Connection between action plan and impact on student achievement is clear. (InTASC 9, 10; CAEP A1.1)
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1 Points
No connection between action plan outcome and student achievement is provided
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2 Points
Connection between action plan outcome and student achievement is provided; justification of that connection may or may not be included
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3 Points
Connection between action plan outcome and student achievement is provided; justification of that connection is included; limitations or outside interferences to improved student achievement are identified
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Criteria
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Unacceptable
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Revisions Required
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Target
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