partafeedback.pdf

FIN 355 Milestone Two Part A Rubric Activity: 5‐2 Final Project Milestone Two (Part A): Draft of Health, Disability, and Long‐Term Care

Insurance

Course: FIN‐355‐H7385 Risk Mgmt and Insurance Plan 22EW4

Name: Cierra Bogan

Criteria Proficient Needs Improvement

Not Evident Criterion Score

Health, Disability, and Long‐

Term Care Insurance: Potential

Health Insurance Options

22.5 / 30 30 points

Analyzes

potential health

insurance

options for the

clients,

recommending a

health insurance

option that best

meet the clients’

needs, and

supports

recommendation

with relevant

client

information

0 points

Does not

analyze potential

health insurance

options for the

clients,

recommending a

health insurance

option to the

clients

Criterion Feedback

Great job with the analysis of the two plans. Which one would you recommend?

22.5 points

Analyzes

potential health

insurance

options for the

clients,

recommending a

health insurance

option to the

clients, but

analysis is

cursory or

contains

inaccuracies, or

recommended

insurance option

is not

appropriate, or

supporting client

information is

irrelevant or

nonexistent

Feedback for 5-2 Final Project Milestone Two (Part A): Draft of Health, ... https://learn.snhu.edu/d2l/lms/dropbox/user/folder_user_view_feedback....

1 of 3 4/24/2022, 10:38 AM

Criteria Proficient Needs Improvement

Not Evident Criterion Score

Health, Disability, and Long‐

Term Care Insurance: Disability

Insurance

22.5 / 30

Health, Disability, and Long‐

Term Care Insurance: Long‐

Term Care Insurance

22.5 / 30

30 points

Discusses the

ability of the

clients’ disability

insurance to

meet their

coverage needs,

making

recommendation

s where

appropriate, and

supports

response with

relevant client

information

0 points

Does not discuss

the ability of the

clients’ disability

insurance to

meet their

coverage needs,

making

recommendation

s where

appropriate

Criterion Feedback

Nice job recommending 70% or more in income protection. Please note John has 50% coverage

up to $2,500/month, not plus $2,500. It is highly unlikely John would be able to negotiate

better coverage through his employer. He would have to go purchase a disability plan through

an agent. 30 points

Analyzes the

clients’ health

information,

determining at

what age the

clients should

purchase long‐

term care

insurance, and

supports

determination

with relevant

client

information

0 points

Does not

analyze the

clients’ health

information,

determining at

what age the

clients should

purchase long‐

term care

insurance

22.5 points

Discusses the

ability of the

clients’ disability

insurance to

meet their

coverage needs,

making

recommendatio

ns where

appropriate, but

response is

cursory or

illogical or

contains

inaccuracies, or

supporting client

information is

irrelevant or

nonexistent

22.5 points

Analyzes the

clients’ health

information,

determining at

what age the

clients should

purchase long‐

term care

insurance, but

response is

cursory or

illogical or

contains

inaccuracies, or

supporting client

information is

irrelevant or

nonexistent

Feedback for 5-2 Final Project Milestone Two (Part A): Draft of Health, ... https://learn.snhu.edu/d2l/lms/dropbox/user/folder_user_view_feedback....

2 of 3 4/24/2022, 10:38 AM

Total 77.5 / 100

Overall Score

Criteria Proficient Needs Improvement

Not Evident Criterion Score

Articulation of Response 10 / 10

Criterion Feedback

You make some good points, but I do not quite understand what you are trying to convey.

7.5 points

Submission has

major errors

related to

citations,

grammar,

spelling, syntax,

or organization

that negatively

impact

readability and

articulation of

main ideas

0 points

Submission has

critical errors

related to

citations,

grammar,

spelling, syntax,

or organization

that prevent

understanding of

ideas

Criterion Feedback

In the future, please use commas for each thousand, i.e. $1,000 instead of $1000.

Proficient Instructors should not modify

this row (it will automate from

the scores above). This score

represents the average

evaluation across all rubric

criteria.

Needs Improvement Instructors should not modify

this row (it will automate from

the scores above). This score

represents the average

evaluation across all rubric

criteria.

Not Evident Instructors should not modify

this row (it will automate from

the scores above). This score

represents the average

evaluation across all rubric

criteria.

10 points

Submission has

no major errors

related to

citations,

grammar,

spelling, syntax,

or organization

Feedback for 5-2 Final Project Milestone Two (Part A): Draft of Health, ... https://learn.snhu.edu/d2l/lms/dropbox/user/folder_user_view_feedback....

3 of 3 4/24/2022, 10:38 AM