Physiology and Pharmacology (Due 24 hours)

Feedback Based on the Rubric

I encourage you to utilize the feedback below to improve your paper, as needed, to earn the highest possible score.

Key:

( 🟥 Need improvement 🟩 Done well, maintain )

Abstract

( 🟩 Addressed the medication and its significance. 🟩 Provided evidence supporting the significance. 🟩 It is succinct and well written. )

Introduction

( 🟥 Improve: add an introduction to include the following: 🟥 Clearly state the medication that you have chosen and describe its uses. 🟥 Clearly state the purpose of researching the chosen medi cation. 🟥 Indicate the main points that you will cover in the paper. 🟩 Approached the expectations. )

Body

( 🟥 Improve : Add manufacturing company. 🟥 Improve : Expand the contraindications. 🟥 Improve: Integrate and appropriately cite in-text credible and current scientific evidence. 🟩 Included most of the required parts. )

Conclusion

( 🟥 Improve: include insights on the medication and its treatment based on what is integrated within the paper. )

Reference Page

( 🟥 Improve: include at least five credible references with scientific evidence (e.g., research studies on the medication published in peer-reviewed journals; information from websites are not sufficient) 🟩 Included some references. 🟩 Cited all references in the text. )

APA & Mechanics

( 🟥 Improve: Proofread your paper to correct errors. 🟩 Formatted the references appropriately . )

Overall Rough Draft

( 🟥 Improve: make sure to utilize the feedback provided here. 🟩 Overall, your draft is acceptable. Most of the required parts of the paper are included in the draft. )