Order #413757 Topic: revisions for microeconomic issues research project PART 2

Dear Writer,

This paper was confusing at times, in particular the discussion about concentration ratio on page 2. Page 3 is the most successful of the paper.

Fix: Overall, I think you need to go into more detail and make pages 1 and 2 more clear.

Fix: And you can't use the FedEx website for 3 of the sources. This is really only 1 source.