English Literature (Iliad by Homer)

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Iliad Imitation Writing

Part One: Write an imitation of the first 16 lines of Book 1 of Iliad. Choose a movie as your subject (I chose The Jungle Book movie). Remember, you are only introducing that subject in your imitation; you do not need to tell the entire story. Follow the example in the following page.

Original Lines from Iliad

Purpose of Line

Your Imitation

The Jungle book

Rage:

Overriding emotion causing conflict (single noun)

Sing, Goddess, Achilles’ rage,

Verb, call upon god(s), repeat emotion

Black and murderous, that cost the Greeks

further description of emotion/conflict

Incalculable pain,

pitched countless souls

Of heroes into Hades’ dark,

And left their bodies to rot as feasts

For dogs and birds, as Zeus’ will was done.

Cause of emotion

Begin with the clash between Agamemnon—

plot line where the story begins

The Greek warlord—and godlike Achilles.

states initial conflict

Which of the immortals set these two

At each other’s throats?

Apollo,

Zeus’ son and Leto’s, offended

By the warlord Agamemnon had dishonored

Chryses, Apollo’s priest, so the god

Struck the Greek camp with plague,

And the soldiers were dying of it.

description of plot elements that caused conflict

Example

Original Lines from Iliad

Purpose of Line

Sample Imitation

“Finding Nemo”

Rage:

Overriding emotion causing conflict (single noun)

Love:

Sing, Goddess, Achilles’ rage,

Verb, call upon god(s), repeat emotion

Sing, mermaids, a father’s love,

Black and murderous, that cost the Greeks

further description of emotion/conflict

deep and strong, that costs a fish everything

Incalculable pain,

pitched countless souls

Of heroes into Hades’ dark,

And left their bodies to rot as feasts

For dogs and birds, as Zeus’ will was done.

Cause of emotion

Incredible loss

that drives a parent

to search and find,

to become a hero

Begin with the clash between Agamemnon—

plot line where the story begins

Begin with the disappearance of

Nemo--

The Greek warlord—and godlike Achilles.

states initial conflict

And his clownfish father—brave and loyal Marin.

Which of the immortals set these two

At each other’s throats?

Apollo,

Zeus’ son and Leto’s, offended

By the warlord Agamemnon had dishonored

Chryses, Apollo’s priest, so the god

Struck the Greek camp with plague,

And the soldiers were dying of it.

description of plot elements that caused conflict

Will Marin find his long-lost son?

Will Dory remember—anything?

He sets on his journey

through oceans and reefs

past seagulls and cities.

To find his only son.