English Literature (Iliad by Homer)
Iliad Imitation Writing
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Original Lines from Iliad |
Purpose of Line |
Your Imitation The Jungle book |
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Rage: |
Overriding emotion causing conflict (single noun) |
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Sing, Goddess, Achilles’ rage, |
Verb, call upon god(s), repeat emotion |
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Black and murderous, that cost the Greeks |
further description of emotion/conflict |
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Incalculable pain, pitched countless souls Of heroes into Hades’ dark, And left their bodies to rot as feasts For dogs and birds, as Zeus’ will was done. |
Cause of emotion
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Begin with the clash between Agamemnon— |
plot line where the story begins |
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The Greek warlord—and godlike Achilles. |
states initial conflict |
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Which of the immortals set these two At each other’s throats? Apollo, Zeus’ son and Leto’s, offended By the warlord Agamemnon had dishonored Chryses, Apollo’s priest, so the god Struck the Greek camp with plague, And the soldiers were dying of it. |
description of plot elements that caused conflict |
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Example
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Original Lines from Iliad |
Purpose of Line |
Sample Imitation “Finding Nemo” |
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Rage: |
Overriding emotion causing conflict (single noun) |
Love: |
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Sing, Goddess, Achilles’ rage, |
Verb, call upon god(s), repeat emotion |
Sing, mermaids, a father’s love, |
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Black and murderous, that cost the Greeks |
further description of emotion/conflict |
deep and strong, that costs a fish everything |
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Incalculable pain, pitched countless souls Of heroes into Hades’ dark, And left their bodies to rot as feasts For dogs and birds, as Zeus’ will was done. |
Cause of emotion
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Incredible loss that drives a parent to search and find, to become a hero
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Begin with the clash between Agamemnon— |
plot line where the story begins |
Begin with the disappearance of Nemo--
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The Greek warlord—and godlike Achilles. |
states initial conflict |
And his clownfish father—brave and loyal Marin. |
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Which of the immortals set these two At each other’s throats? Apollo, Zeus’ son and Leto’s, offended By the warlord Agamemnon had dishonored Chryses, Apollo’s priest, so the god Struck the Greek camp with plague, And the soldiers were dying of it. |
description of plot elements that caused conflict |
Will Marin find his long-lost son? Will Dory remember—anything? He sets on his journey through oceans and reefs past seagulls and cities. To find his only son.
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