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Position Paper 1

Ethical Issue: Abortion

Grading criteria

· Critical analysis of each position based on literature review (counter arguments and defense) 50% 40

· You MUST integrate relevant Bioethical principles/models.

· All facts MUST be supported by citations from the literature

Comments:

Your critical analysis needed additional development with the integrations of the bioethical principles/models. You mentioned principles in the introduction but not in the body of the paper . You also included some facts with out citations. When you have a long list of authors, list all names first, then of you cite them again you can list the first name et al.

PAPER 1

Introduction

Critical Analysis of:

Problem Solving _____

Decision Making _____

Delegation _____

Team Participation _____

Conflict Resolution ___x__

Motivation _____

Performance Evaluation _____

NOTE: All facts MUST be supported by the literature

Integration, Improvement & Enhancement of your personal approach to the area you selected

Comments:

Your critical analysis and Integration, Improvement and Enhancement needed additional development. Your in text citations were not all APA formatted. When you have two or more names, you must always list all the names first and then the next time you can use et.al. –page 3. Your reference listing ha some errors as well – journal titles need to be italicized.