Classics Anthropology and Art History 300

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1. It would be better to introduce the movie background first and talk about the details such as costumes and designs later in the essay.

2. The paragraph about the costumes was terrific. You described all the details. It would be great to add another artistic element, such as building/music in the movie, to elaborate on how they address Greek and Roman art. It would be even better if you connected those to the contents discussed in class.

3. There's no period before the brackets of the in-text citations.