Persuasive speech On Food Waste

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Your topic is great.  Just two slight changes.

Introduction Credibility.....add the naming of some sources. At the end of what you have written, but.....In addition, I have used the following sources to gather additional information (and then name 2or 3 of your sources ) -3

In the Conclusion:

I. A Call to Action is vital here. This is where you ask your audience (classmates) to do something very specific now.  For instance, possible you add a line such as...."I ask all of you this next week to make one of your meals just a leftovers meal where you eat the items you already have before you throw them out and waste them."  You can add more to do something different or more, but you need to have a specific ask.  It is vital to a persuasive speech. -5