5 page assessment due in 30 hours

Thanks for posting,

This is good work and does meet at least Proficient standards across all criteria but there are a few places that need more depth.

Please see comments below.

RUBRICS

CRITERIA 1

Background of the study: Summarize briefly what is known so far about the phenomena under investigation.

PROFICIENT Summarizes briefly what is known so far about the phenomena under investigation.

COMMENTS:

This is consistent with the previous submission but seem to be using a lot more older sources?

CRITERIA 2

Statement of the problem: Present the description of the research problem and an explanation that describes how the research problem led to the current research question.

DISTINGUISHED Presents a description of the research problem and an explanation that describes how the research problem led to the current research question. Provides a comprehensive but concise description of the connection of problem to RQ.

COMMENTS:

This is much clearer.

CRITERIA 3

Purpose of the study: Describe what information is needed in order to advance the knowledge base.

PROFICIENT Describes what information is needed in order to advance the knowledge base

COMMENTS:

This is much clearer on info needed to advance the knowledge base.

CRITERIA 4

Significance of the study: Explain the major themes identified in the literature.

PROFICIENT Explains the major themes identified in the literature review

COMMENTS:

This has more info on themes but still need more recent lit.

CRITERIA 5

Research design: Summarize the design approach by identifying whether it is qualitative or quantitative.

PROFICIENT Summarizes the design approach by identifying whether it is qualitative or quantitative.

COMMENTS:

This is clearly identified as qual but need more in-depth justification.

CRITERIA 6

Adhere to APA style and formatting guidelines; writing is concise and well organized.

PROFICIENT Adheres to APA style and formatting guidelines; writing is concise and well organized.

COMMENTS:

This is consistent with the previous submission.