Comparing a cultural diversity

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COMPETENCY: Analyze global issues that influence human resource practices for multinational corporations (MNCs).

CRITERION: Describe how each country regards women and religion.

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Identifies, but does not describe, how each country regards women and religion.

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 What is it about the religious landscape in both countries that directly impacts the situation of women in the workforce?

CRITERION: Assess how these assumptions impact an organization's global recruiting and hiring practices.

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Identifies, but does not assess, how these assumptions impact an organization's global recruiting and staffing practices.

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There was so much more that could have been discussed here. For example, it would have been interesting to hear your thoughts on how to recruit female candidates in Kosovo. What would they be looking for in an employer? How would an employer find and communicate with the female talent pool there? What types of assessments and interview techniques should be used to ensure an unbiased selection process? Also, do they need to invest in education programs in the community to grow their candidate pools for the future?

COMPETENCY: Analyze the impact of cross-cultural communications on employee management in multinational corporations (MNCs).

CRITERION: Examine organizational integration and communication impacts for HR in this scenario.

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Does not identify organizational integration and communication impacts for HR in this scenario. 

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It doesn't look like you really addressed this topic. 

COMPETENCY: Communicate in a manner that is scholarly, professional, and consistent with expectations for members of the human resource profession.

CRITERION: Write in a professional style using APA citations and format with correct grammar, usage, and mechanics.

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Writes exceptionally and in a professional style using APA citations and format, with correct grammar, usage, and mechanics that are error-free.

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Well written