writing a person around me

ESL 6A

6A

Mr.Moran

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Ruowen Dong

Tittle:A Friend Lia

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I.Introduction

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A.general sta statement:many excellent people around me

me

B.more spe special statement:impressive to me

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C.Thesis Sta Statement:independent woman

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II.topic sic sentence:learning independence

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A.make stu study plan by herself

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B.learning ind independence after school

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C.keep goo good working by herself

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D.pay tui tuition by herself

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E.conclusion

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III.topic sic sentence:family independence

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A.take car care of child

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B.cook

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C.use hee her own money

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D.clean roo room

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E.conclusion

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IV.topic sic sentence:work independence

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A.do not not need assistant

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B.have her her own idea

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C.deal wit with problems by herself

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D.communimunicate with customers alone

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E.conclusion

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V.conclusion

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A.summary

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B.restatement

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C.result