Strategies for weight loss in obese patient.

Thesis Statement-

Off all health problems, obesity can be defined as an underweight, overweight and obesity in adults and children. Obesity being a highly prevalent across different age in the society, and due to its great implication as a predisposing factor in sedentary illness, effective strategies have to be developed as mitigation efforts. These strategies have to be diversified to meet the problem pattern with majority of the measures targeting early youth population in order for the adult population to remain health. Many ways that we can target these changes include major dietary change, being in a peaceful emotional state of mind, and off course medications from your primary care provider.

Outline

I. Introduction

A. What is obesity?

B. Main events that leads to obesity at a young age.

II. What causes obesity in adolescents and adults?

A. What age group is prone to develop further stages of obesity?

B. Does race or ethnicity have something to do with obesity?

C. Other health complications that are related to obesity.

III. Aspects that obesity affects in your life and how to prevent or treat obesity.

A. Socially, emotionally and psychologically.

B. Changing diet and exercise.

C. Physical problems that are results of obesity.

IV. Conclusion

A. Educate yourself to prevent further health problems.

The comments she left for me.

because of your thesis statement, each of the three points here should be full paragraphs - the two outlined points above (intro, causes) are fine, and can be paragraphs, but then your paper is about effective change to combat obesity, so focus on that strongly.

these three points should be in the same order as listed in the thesis statement. Also, the information needs to go with the title, strategies.