TERM PAPER - A+ WORK Required. Zero Plagiarism. Every Single Instruction Followed in line with Grading Rubric
jhayes
OUTLINEFEEDBACKNEW.docxI looked over this outline, and this is far more focused than the original version you present. I would not change the score on the outline, but I have considered the outline only for giving feedback to help you on the Term Paper.
There are two areas I want to clarify:
1) What is the one sentence thesis your entire paper rests on? I can see the focus on enthymeme, but I think your concluding remarks are the closest to an argumentative thesis statement. They are as follows:
In discussing the enthymeme there is a change of pronunciation from argumentation concept to logic. Originally the attention of Aristotle seems to be focused on categories of the considerable relationship between a premise and conclusion.
So, are you arguing that the enthymeme has changed since Aristotle's original discussions of it? If so, I think documenting that change and giving a theory as to WHY it has changed would be a great start. Again, I don't know if that's your approach, but that brings me back to why I'm asking for a single sentence thesis.
2) You give several different sections on the enthymeme in your outline, and they seem to connect to different sources you've found. What you want to do is make sure each paragraph isn't just an overview of one source. You want to integrate the sources within a discussion, meaning how does one person's view of enthymeme connect (or not_ with someone else's discussion). This will keep those studies from being isolated in individual paragraphs and provide a clear focus throughout the paper (one that connects back to the thesis). I think the online writing center (once you have the paper typed out), can really help you integrate the sources and develop the conversation I'm talking about.
Again, this is much stronger than the first outline, so you're definitely moving in the right direction.
