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Healthy Emotional Development and Maturation Outline

I. Introduction Hook: Technology has changed the world in several ways, both positively and negatively. However, the constant factor remains to be the dependence that has been cultured by the use of these devices. Background information: Mobile communication technologies continue to get smaller, lighter and more portable while the personal social interactions are gradually fading away and getting replaced by mobile communication. Personal physical interactions with individuals have been reduced to robotic interactions with humans, which feel more mechanical than human. This demeans the development of connections between the different individuals and further degrades the development of maturity. Thesis Statement: Mobile communication technologies are continually transforming the parameters of healthy emotional development and maturation through making humans less dependent on each other and forcing them to learn more towards devices and the connectivity they offer.

II. Body Supportive Arguments

A. Mobile communication technologies weaken one-on-one interaction and undermine social skills

B. Mobile communication technology prevents human emotional connection, sense of touch, and relationship management

C. Mobile communication technology makes human beings to plug into technology and unplug themselves from the real world.

D. Increase the use of mobile communication technology limits the ability of human self-management and self-awareness. 2 Contrary argument

A. Mobile technology offers effective communication channels, which boost human interaction

III. Conclusion

The increase in the use of technology causes a decline in the development of emotional processes at any age. The incorporation of the technological world into daily life is also the cause of development issues depending on the different levels of integration. Mobile communication technologies affect the sense of touch and unplug human from the real world as it undermines self-awareness, reduces social skills, and

批注 [DB1]: The first sentence gives both positive and negative aspects; thus no need to start with ‘however’

批注 [DB2]: Dependence to what? specify

批注 [DB3]: What are ‘these’? In the first sentence you talk about technology, and the second you jump to

technological devices as if they have been addressed

above.

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批注 [DB4]: So you argue that communication technologies make people less dependent to one another,

contrary to Turkle’s argument; you have a thesis

statement!

批注 [DB5]: Supportive arguments should be in support of your own argument (thesis statement). These

supportive arguments are contrary to your thesis, and

your counter-argument is in support of your thesis

stunts motivation.