Outline and research paper

Reaserch outline and reaserch paper

My research idea:

One of the most interested ideas to me is (Healthier Communities) it's an important idea to write about especially now a days. A healthy community is defined by the ability of it's people to undertake their daily activities without diseases. And a healthy community attract outsiders like tourists. There are social and cultural factors like tradition, politics, beliefs, socioeconomic status, social norms and the economy. I will get into each one of these in details in my research paper.

Instructor response to my topic idea:

This is too general of an idea, if you want to write about the cultural impact on health care in a society, fine, however you need to narrow down your focus to be about one particular group of people (e.g. the impact of culture on the health of Korean s or Saudies or Americans...) 

My research topic:

My research topic would be "Healthier communities" Having a healthy community

depends on the people living in it. My idea of a healthy community is where people are free

from mental and physical problems. People have the opportunity to live to their full

potentials. A healthy community is defined by the ability of its people to undertake their daily

activities without diseases or pain.

Instructor response to my research topic:

I guess i may have mentioned this before, you need to focus your topic; after all you are not writing a book; maybe you can take one aspect of health and discuss how culture impacts that.  

Instruction for Outline:

This is the skeleton of your paper/project (even with a video project there should be a script/plan) . The outline could be a bullet-point structure and should include a title, introduction: presenting main argument and some background information; Body: bullet points of what and how you will introduce and develop your topic; then a Conclusion: as well bullet point structure of what will go in this section. Please include in each section the main references that you will use for each main point.  A reference page of the potential/preliminary references you will be using should be included. 

And then do the final paper please.